2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I've been reading a book about the Holocaust. I'm not far into the chapters but it's a life of much poverty. I was thinking of this book when I read the title, the life of my life. They were poor but lived on love and trust as much as they could, just as the poem indicates.
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reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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I've been reading a book about the Holocaust. I'm not far into the chapters but it's a life of much poverty. I was thinking of this book when I read the title, the life of my life. They were poor but lived on love and trust as much as they could, just as the poem indicates.
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Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much (*=*)
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Comment from rspoet
Hello Gypsy,
You've written an excellent free verse poem with marvelous imagery
and some perhaps subtle word play.
I especially like the last verse and description of universal immortality.
Gorgeous presentation to match your words.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Hello Gypsy,
You've written an excellent free verse poem with marvelous imagery
and some perhaps subtle word play.
I especially like the last verse and description of universal immortality.
Gorgeous presentation to match your words.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Robert, is so good to hear from you. Your exceptional six stars review mean a lot to me. Thank you.
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