Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

I certainly know what the oppressive humidity is like that Ayesha is feeling.

Very good descriptions of the thunder and rain - like bloodstain's in the dust - loved that.
A great chapter Tony. Well done,
Cheers
Valda

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 Comment Written 10-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024

Thanks, Valda. So you've been copping a bit of heat too! We're in the low to mid thirties for most of the coming week or two.
Better keep those fluids up. I've just got another carton of beer in. LOL

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I hope Ayesha does have enough money and can come up with a good solution to save Abhamaru. What I liked best about this chapter is the growing relationship between Ayesha and Somchai. He has turned out to be a really good friend. He was really wary about her but seems to appreciate her sincere care for Bapit.

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 Comment Written 10-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024

Thanks for these comments, Helen. I'm hoping to show a degree of personal growth in the characters as the story progresses. All good wishes, Tony