A Question...
A 1-6-1 Poem25 total reviews
Comment from zanni
This is a strong photo and a powerful 1 6 1 poem that asks the reader to consider a deep question that results in a different story from different readers. It leaves a sad mood,
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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This is a strong photo and a powerful 1 6 1 poem that asks the reader to consider a deep question that results in a different story from different readers. It leaves a sad mood,
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from tempeste
Ciao !
I'm sure the kids in Gaza are asking the same question.
Why their parents were killed, their siblings blown to pieces?
Why they living in a tent and are starving while some 150 trucks with food, water and medical aid are waiting to enter Gaza but the IDF doesn't allow them to pass?
Because leaders in power don't care a hoot about the pain, destruction and death they cause.
The artwork is haunting.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Ciao !
I'm sure the kids in Gaza are asking the same question.
Why their parents were killed, their siblings blown to pieces?
Why they living in a tent and are starving while some 150 trucks with food, water and medical aid are waiting to enter Gaza but the IDF doesn't allow them to pass?
Because leaders in power don't care a hoot about the pain, destruction and death they cause.
The artwork is haunting.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Hello, tempeste, I have left your review until the contest was over,
yes, there is way too much happening to children all over the world, and you are correct our leaders just do not care, thank you so very much for your excellent comments, and promoting my work so very high, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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I just woke up it?s 1.30 here and saw your post.
Congratulations on your well deserved win! 🥂 🍾
I also gave you your seventh vote and left a comment below having no way to let the author know.
Keep safe ! 🍀
Comment from RodG
This short poem is both provocative and poignant, especially accompanied by that marvelous artwork. A child can be confused by so many things in the world he lives in. Rod
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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This short poem is both provocative and poignant, especially accompanied by that marvelous artwork. A child can be confused by so many things in the world he lives in. Rod
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you so very much
Comment from Mark Jackson
This is one that makes you think. It is as you say a question and not an answer and I think it works. I leaves me wondering what those eyes would cry for? I also ask why childhood? I really like it god luck in the competition.
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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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This is one that makes you think. It is as you say a question and not an answer and I think it works. I leaves me wondering what those eyes would cry for? I also ask why childhood? I really like it god luck in the competition.
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you so very much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Children cry a lot as they are sorting out their feelings. I cried a lot during my childhood and when I left home I rarely cried and only with tears of joy when I reached adulthood, I enjoyed your poignant post, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Children cry a lot as they are sorting out their feelings. I cried a lot during my childhood and when I left home I rarely cried and only with tears of joy when I reached adulthood, I enjoyed your poignant post, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you so very much