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When the Truth Hurts

Some pain doesn't leave

52 total reviews 
Comment from jaded831
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Very truthful, your poem tugs at my heartstrings. I am wheelchair bound so can relate, depending on others sucks, especially when you use to be the hero. Great job, your poem is excellent.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
    Oy, that must be so difficult. But, jaded831, maybe your loved ones to whom you've always been the hero like being able to finally do something nice for YOU. (Heroes have this way of not being all that good at "receiving" goodness, I've noticed throughout my life.)

    Thank you for the very lovely review.
Comment from Dawn Munro
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I agree. It's an excellent poem. Time does not heal wounds; in some cases, it magnifies the pain, as in the death of a loved one -- the loss is felt more keenly as time passes.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
    I completely agree. Thank you for this insightful review, Dawn.
reply by Dawn Munro on 19-Jan-2024
    You are very welcome.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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This is true, and your picture is so evocative. It is so strong you almost don't need the poetry. Your poem is incredibly moving. I can find no fault, but I am out of sixes. Karen

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
    Who needs to bestow a six when the review is so wonderful. Thank you for such kind and supportive words!
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Okay this is a very poignant truth. Too many wars have left way too many battle scared young men on the home front.

Not sure how to end the steady flow. Evil men will never stop making wars.
D

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
    Here's my theory: Whoever declares war (whether it's the President, the Congress, etc) is the one who then has to go fight it. So world leaders would be out there defending their stupid-ass war decree. I have to imagine it would cut down the military death rate substantially!!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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This sure is a touching poem. Time does heal wounds but not when they are severe like this soldier has experienced. What a wonderful poem. Can you imagine how a man feels when a young child is pushing a wheelchair? Does he feel blessed to be home?

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
    I bet he feels a bushel-barrel full of feelings, but you're right: foremost, it's probably just grateful to be home.

    Thanks for this insightful review. Very much appreciated.
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi,
Yes time doesn't heal all physical wounds But, I think this axiom is meant for emotional wounds not physical ones.
Good luck with the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a good rest of the week.
Joan

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
    I wonder, though, if the emotional ones are connected to the physical ones if they can possibly heal then. You look at your missing leg and remember the landmine, and there's no way you're going to emotionally heal, either.

    Thanks for the thought-provoking review.
reply by dragonpoet on 19-Jan-2024
    You're welcome. That may be right. But I think that for some, getting a prothesis to replace the missing limb helps. It allows for somewhat normal life. At least no need for a wheel chair.
    Keep writing and stay healthy.
    Have a wonderful weekend,
    Joan
Comment from Ginda Simpson
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Most unfortunately and very true indeed, not all wounds can be healed. The only semblance of healing is to be at peace with them so one can move forward. Your words are powerful.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
    I really appreciate your words, too. Very validating review. Thank you.
Comment from Lisasview
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This is so very true!!!!!
Some do last forever...
From emotional to physical.
I liked your poem and wish you the best in the contest.
Lisasview, evening in Spain

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
    Thanks very much; I appreciate your encouraging words and the well-wishes, too.
Comment from Daylily
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Wish I had a six left for this. I was raised in a military family and what you have written sinks deep into my heart. The picture is priceless. I am glad that some medical advances have been very helpful to many wounded in battle. However, a lot more progress is needed. Thank you for sharing this very strong entry.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
    You're so right. I feel like I can never repay that debt for their courage and selflessness --and that's whether they're injured or NOT. It's such an act of altruism to join the Armed Forces.

    Thanks for the affirming review. Very much appreciated.
Comment from jim vecchio
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Thank you for highlighting the plight of many, most especially disabled veterans, in twelve small words. This effort is very effective, sand should find its way to the top in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
    From your words to G-d's ears, Jim. Thank you very much for this affirming review.
reply by jim vecchio on 18-Jan-2024
    Thanks for writing!