Return To Concorde Valley
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "A New Life Begins"Fantasy based on the intersection of two worlds.
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Comment from BethShelby
It is hard to imagine a queen making lunch like an ordinary mother. I love your story. I think it very creative fantasy fiction. You characters in the family of Gods are all so gracious and welcoming. I don't suppose Echo will return to her other life.
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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
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It is hard to imagine a queen making lunch like an ordinary mother. I love your story. I think it very creative fantasy fiction. You characters in the family of Gods are all so gracious and welcoming. I don't suppose Echo will return to her other life.
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Comment Written 14-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the review, Beth!
The whole family will prove to be quite humble, and I don?t expect Echo will want to go back, either.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment from BethShelby
It is hard to imagine a queen making lunch like an ordinary mother. I love your story. I think it very creative fantasy fiction. You characters in the family of Gods are all so gracious and welcoming. I don't suppose Echo will return to her other life.
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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
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It is hard to imagine a queen making lunch like an ordinary mother. I love your story. I think it very creative fantasy fiction. You characters in the family of Gods are all so gracious and welcoming. I don't suppose Echo will return to her other life.
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Comment Written 14-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
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I?m not sure why your review came through twice, but I still appreciate your time on this chapter.
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I read on google that routers sometimes send things through more than once. Most poeple seem glad to get more reviews.
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Oh, I?ll take it, for sure!