Panpipes
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Wow, that was a twist! Now he really is dead, I wonder if bits of him will end up on shore, I've heard of that happening. But, Bruno was already pronounced legally dead, what a turnaround!
Poor Bapit, in so much pain and lovesick. He has a hard journey ahead of him, and the one person who could possibly have made it easier, isn't there. Ayesha is miles away and she has a dislike of imperfections. Will she be there for him anyway? This is really going well, and I'm enjoying it immensely. Well done!! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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Wow, that was a twist! Now he really is dead, I wonder if bits of him will end up on shore, I've heard of that happening. But, Bruno was already pronounced legally dead, what a turnaround!
Poor Bapit, in so much pain and lovesick. He has a hard journey ahead of him, and the one person who could possibly have made it easier, isn't there. Ayesha is miles away and she has a dislike of imperfections. Will she be there for him anyway? This is really going well, and I'm enjoying it immensely. Well done!! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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Thanks so much for your encouragement and the validation of a sixth star, Sandra. Greatly appreciated. I'm delighted to hear that you're enjoying the story. All the best, Tony.
Comment from Sanku
This is getting murkier and murkier .Did he die a natural death or Suttukul got something inside him? Is the news Suttukul's arrest is true or is it a ruse to keep Ayesha in Australia?/ waiting for the next...
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This is getting murkier and murkier .Did he die a natural death or Suttukul got something inside him? Is the news Suttukul's arrest is true or is it a ruse to keep Ayesha in Australia?/ waiting for the next...
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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Thanks for your review, Sanku. Interesting questions. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Poor Bapid, I feel bad he is in so much pain.
I hope Ayesha doesn't get in trouble.
The story is coming along nicely. Good characters and plot development.
Well done!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis  Â
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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Poor Bapid, I feel bad he is in so much pain.
I hope Ayesha doesn't get in trouble.
The story is coming along nicely. Good characters and plot development.
Well done!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis  Â
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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Thanks for your comments and encouragement, Gypsy. All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from royowen
Wow, although Ayesha doesn't realise it the police are already aware that she isn't involved in the drug smuggle, and now she's a widow in reality, and Bapit is without a limb, and worse than that completely and utterly bereft, you've developed a complicated plot quickly, we should be in the middle story, but not yet, beautifully written Tony, Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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Wow, although Ayesha doesn't realise it the police are already aware that she isn't involved in the drug smuggle, and now she's a widow in reality, and Bapit is without a limb, and worse than that completely and utterly bereft, you've developed a complicated plot quickly, we should be in the middle story, but not yet, beautifully written Tony, Blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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Thanks for a great review, Roy. Appreciated. All good wishes, Tony
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Most welcome Tony
Comment from GWHARGIS
Dang! I'd like to say I'm sorry Bruno died but you reap what you sow. He was a despicable human and karma returned the favor. Johnno disosed of the body in a matter of fact way. Chilling. This is a great story. Gretchen
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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Dang! I'd like to say I'm sorry Bruno died but you reap what you sow. He was a despicable human and karma returned the favor. Johnno disosed of the body in a matter of fact way. Chilling. This is a great story. Gretchen
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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Thanks, Gretchen. I'm delighted that you are continuing to enjoy the story. Best wishes, Tony.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
An informative chapter this one, with Bapit still mournng more his loss of Ayesha than his leg. I think Bruno got what he rightly deserved and made a good meal for the sharks. That final fishing trip was well described Tony., and a very good read.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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An informative chapter this one, with Bapit still mournng more his loss of Ayesha than his leg. I think Bruno got what he rightly deserved and made a good meal for the sharks. That final fishing trip was well described Tony., and a very good read.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Thank, Valda. I've never been game fishing, so it's good to know that bit worked well.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Ayesha is fortunate Bruno never shared any of his business with her. It is much more pleasant spending money when it seems to appear by magic. Bruno's fishing trip has a happy ending for Ayesha as he can't bother her anymore and Johnno found an easy way to get rid of a body. Good story that I look forward to reading again soon.
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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Ayesha is fortunate Bruno never shared any of his business with her. It is much more pleasant spending money when it seems to appear by magic. Bruno's fishing trip has a happy ending for Ayesha as he can't bother her anymore and Johnno found an easy way to get rid of a body. Good story that I look forward to reading again soon.
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Tell me more about this money that appears by magic! LOL
Thanks for the review and comments.
All good wishes, Tony
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She never asked how he earned it and never watching him work or had to listen to how he has aches and pains from working, he just always had money.
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True. It seems she was, as Roy put it, a trophy wife.
Comment from Navada
Well, one of the best things about this episode is that Bruno gets his comeuppance. I like that the shark was taken by the sharks (poetic justice!) and you didn't succumb to the temptation for him to go into the water while still alive - that might have been a bit much. :)
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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Well, one of the best things about this episode is that Bruno gets his comeuppance. I like that the shark was taken by the sharks (poetic justice!) and you didn't succumb to the temptation for him to go into the water while still alive - that might have been a bit much. :)
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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That would have been a bit gruesome! Thanks for the review and comments. All good wishes, Tony
Comment from Sankey
Wow! What a chapter. The plot is thickening more and more. Who is gonna get caught over all this even though Bruno had supposedly been cremated!
Your old style has returned in big style.
Oops! One spag. both across to Manl[e]y?'
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Wow! What a chapter. The plot is thickening more and more. Who is gonna get caught over all this even though Bruno had supposedly been cremated!
Your old style has returned in big style.
Oops! One spag. both across to Manl[e]y?'
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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You can tell I'm from South Australia! LOL. Thanks for the pick up.
I'm delighted you enjoyed this one enough to drop a six on it.
All good wishes
Tony
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Yeah well that and your awful water, hehe. The only place I know where you need a shower to wash Murray River water off ya!
