Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This just keeps getting better and better. The governmental officials seem to have bad intentions in every country. The descriptions are really good. Very realistic mannerisms and fialigue. Great chapter. Gretchen

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024

Thanks very much for your kind comments, Gretchen. As always, greatly appreciated. All good wishes, Tony.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Another great chapter. I almost feel sorry for Ayesha, but then she has her vices, too. I am looking forward to seeing how the urn will be turned over for cash - OR is there something afoot? Great read,
~MP~

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024

A few surprises yet to come...
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
All good wishes, Tony.

Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

Well done.
I'm amazed at your command of the various cultures.
As far as plot complications, you write like a master. Great work.
And you certainly know bad guy concepts. (smiley face here)
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024

It takes one to know one! 😂
I spent sixteen years navigating transport aircraft around the world, and have seen a few places in my time.
Thanks very much for your kind comments.

Comment from Navada

Excellent

Ooh, I particuarly like the nice little touch at the end! Could it possibly be an unmarked police car? Or a competitor in the illegal drugs market?
One little edit needed - "devasted". I'm interested to see what will happen with Kamul who is clearly frustrated in his current role and with the malevolent Bruno.

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 Comment Written 05-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024

I'm devastated that one got past me! 😂

Thanks very much for the catch, also for your comments.

reply by Navada on 05-Jan-2024

Ha! You're most welcome! :)

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Congrats on your contest win, Tony! I would love to see your story dramatised on TV. There's just so much intrigue and corruption going on with Ayesha caught in the middle of it all now. It's vividly expressed with great attention to detail and just the perfect entertainment to wile away our winter months. I'm looking forward to reading more. Poor old Bapit by the way:( But at least he's got Ayesha. My best wishes Debbie.

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 Comment Written 05-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024

Thanks for your congratulations, Debbie. That win was quite a surprise!
Glad you're finding this entertaining. Just a couple more chapters to go.
All the best, Tony.