Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Wow, poor widow played again by a husband who fakes death to escape police and now learns that the person who helped her its in the hospital injured. When all of this end and transform into a happy story.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2023

Yes, let's hope for a happy ending. Things look grim for most of the characters at this stage.

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I can feel the slime of the authorities . You have done such a wonderful job describing the slick way certain politicians and others act. Anything to line their own pockets. Another enthralling chapter. Keep em coming. Gretchen

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2023

Thanks, Gretchen. I appreciate your enthusiastic support! Let's hope all the bad eggs get their comeuppance eventually!

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

I can't imagine what Ayesha must be thinking. She's in a strange country, she knows something is wrong, things are not adding up, and she can't quite figure it out. I think I'd have nightmares too.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023

Yes, she seems to have become a pawn in a larger game. Things are not going well for her at this stage.

Comment from Sankey

Exceptional

This was really good. you seem to be churning out these chapters in speedy succession, Time for me to get my act together and get my stuff going, again.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023

Thanks, Geoffrey. Glad you are still enjoying it. I appreciate the sixth star. All good wishes, Tony

Comment from Navada

Excellent

Oh, dear. It was clear that the poor make-up artist would bite the dust. And poor Bapit has apparently been very badly hurt. Ayesha must be feeling so conflicted about her anger with him just before he left their room and now her concern for him.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023

Thanks, Navada. I appreciate your review and comments. Glad you are still enjoying it. All good wishes, Tony

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

As the read down to the bottom of this post my thoughts went to Bapit. I'm glad you said something about how he was doing. I was worried about him. It seems Major Suttikul has it all figured out, but I'm guessing it all going to come back cause him trouble. This is extremely well written. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023

Thanks, Barbara. I appreciate your review and comments. Glad you are still enjoying it. All good wishes, Tony

Comment from royowen

Excellent

The opportunity to create more shadows around the circumstances surrounding the supposed death around Bruno is coming into view. But you've hidden the true motive of the somewhat bent mind of Thai Major, but the one ace in the hole is Kamut, a disliker of his boss, beautifully written Tony, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 28-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023

Thanks, Roy. I appreciate your review and comments. Glad you are still enjoying it. All good wishes, Tony

reply by royowen on 28-Dec-2023

Most welcome