Comment from Gunner Lil

Exceptional

Outstanding. A well written chapter that has this reader wanting more.
Great dialogue that moves the story along. A nice flow and pace. Wonderful sensory descriptions.
Enjoy reading works as this one that I use as a learning tool.
Thank you!

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023

Many thanks for these affirming comments and for the six stars, Gunner. Greatly appreciated. All the best to you for Christmas and the coming year. Tony

Comment from Ken Brody

Excellent

Excellent sample of the novelist's art. Well drawn characters, hidden plot twining around them, mysterious events. We have access to their inner thoughts. The author's style is strong and mature. Thailand though no longer an exotic location for travelers, is still interesting.

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 Comment Written 22-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023

Thank you, Ken, for these affirming comments. Greatly appreciated. It's ten years since I was last in Thailand. You are probably right about the conditions for tourists having deteriorated since then. All good wishes to you and yours for Christmas and the coming year. Tony.