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The Followup to Chasing the Elusive Dream

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Comment from jim vecchio
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Can't wait for that next book! Glad there were no crises or injuries in this one! We had to sell our Connecticut home to find one in the small town of Hilliard, Florida. We had never been to Florida before! We visited Florida, went to a Church service in a neighboring town, talked to the Pastor, and he referred us to a Real Estate Agent. We contacted him and in a fair amount of time bid on a house online and it was not only ours, but a perfect home in every way! Unfortunately, due to sickness and my wife's death, we had to sell it, but my niece arranged a Foundation for my daughter so there won't be any financial concerns when I'm gone.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2023
    Thank you Jim. I hope you got to enjoy your Florida home a while before your wife got sick. I appreciate the nice review.
    Beth
reply by jim vecchio on 07-Dec-2023
    Thanks! We had a wonderful time till I started falling and couldn't get up. But God blessed us greatly!
Comment from Lea Tonin1
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Chattanooga, I haven't seen much of the sakes except for when I flew for work. Of course, they don't give you time to explore when you're working, but that would be an interesting place to visit! Your story is intriguing and you've had a busy life And major changes have occurred too. But we learned by taking chances. And it seems like you have and you've made a fine deal too! A very cool story and I know it's your story So that makes it even cooler! I see no issues with grammar sentence structure subject matter population what a fine Job you did I hope you have a wonderful day!

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 Comment Written 07-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2023
    Thank you Lea, Both New Orleans and Chattanooga are tourist cities with much to see. It's too bad you didn't get to explore. Being someone who love mountains, you likely like Chattanooga best because of mountains around. New Orleans is river towna and very flat. Thanks for the review.
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a very well written chapter in your book, and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I understand the emotion that goes with making a move after so many years when my husband and I moved from California, we had lived in the same home for 24 years and we sold it and moved to Las Cruces New Mexico, I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patric.

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 Comment Written 07-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2023
    Thank you Patricia. I'm pleased the story sounds okay when the computer reads it. Moves are really stressful.
    Beth