Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Of course, you speak from experience because you know that Dick is close by and he's with you even if he's not there physically. Thank you for these reassuring words for Sandra! ð???

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023

Thanks so much for your review and comments. I'm sure Sandra appreciates all the prayers and support she's had from FS members. I know they helped see me through. Christmas is a sad time when you're mourning the loss of a loved one. I hope our words will help. judi

reply by lyenochka on 18-Nov-2023

I know. I was thinking of you as this is the first holidays without Dick for you. 💖🙏

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

This is a lovely poem. I wish I had another star to give you. Writing from Ian's POV is a wonderful idea. As long as memory lasts, our loved one is always there to warm our memories.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023

Thanks for your review and comments. I think Sandra will be comforted by all the support and prayers she's received from FS members. judi

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

What a beautiful verse, Judi! I love the way your sentiments offer so much comfort and reassurance that Ian's presence will always be felt as his memories during these celebratory times live on. Thanks for sharing this special message of condolence. Take care, Debbie

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023

Thanks so much for your review and comments. I hope it'll be a message of hope for her. judi

Comment from Mrs. KT

Exceptional

Hello, judi!
Your tribute poem for Sandra's brother, Ian, is incredibly well-crafted and resonates with how I imagine happens when the family gathers for Christmas following the passing of a loved one.
I always feel the presence of my parents and grandparents.
I know Sandra will deeply cherish these tributes and the memories of her beloved brother...

Thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023

Thanks for your review and comments, and special thank for the six-star rating. Much appreciated. I know I always think of my departed relatives, and not just at Christmas. We do feel their presence. I even think frequently of my pets that have died. judi

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

I have confidence that is the way it is. In my heart and mind I will always hold my Mary and son close in mind. especially during the holidays. Sending blessings your way.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023

Thanks for your review and comments. It's true we are always thinking of our deceased relatives. It makes them seem close to us. judi

Comment from royowen

Excellent

It sounds like you're sensitively written from Ian's viewpoint, connecting with some comforting and thoughtful words, because he's in that ultimate place of comfort and joy, peace everlasting with communication, and it indeed has happened with messages from the 'other side' beautifully written Judy, blessings Riy

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023

Thanks for your review and comments. It seems that Ian had so many health problems, but according to Sandra he was able to remain positive and smiling. judi

reply by royowen on 17-Nov-2023

A rare gift

Comment from damommy

Excellent

We most certainly do feel the presence of a loved one even after their passing. It's a wonderful feeling and somewhat lessens the grief for a few moments. I love your poem. especially the repeated line, "I'll be there."

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023

Thanks so much for your review and comments. Yes, he'll always be there in Sandra's thoughts, and I think that is comforting. judi

Comment from tempeste

Exceptional

Ciao Judi!

I am not familiar to this member. Does she have a username? Not sure who died .. a husband, a son or daughter , a sibling?

Sadly we have all lost dear ones so we know the pains the grief , your lovely words will be of great comfort to Sandra and help her through this difficult time.

Keep safe!

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023

Thanks for your review and comments, and special thank for the generous sixer. He was Sandra's younger brother. I hope she will find comfort in the words FS members have written in her book. judi

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Oh that is so sweet and so beautifully meaningful for Sandra. Another tribute and sign of the lovely community here on this site. The whole concept here just works. Well done and thank you for sharing this. X

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023

Thanks so much for your review and comments. I hope it will be meaningful for Sandra. I read her post today, and she gave quite a bit of information about her brother. That helped when I wrote this. judi

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Oh, Judi, this is just precious! Sandra will love this. It's filled with so much hope and hope is what we all need when loss is so magnanimous. Beautifully penned and illustrated addition to the book for Sandra. She will treasure them all.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs

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 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023

Thanks so much for your review and comments. I hope Sandra will like my offering. I read the post she had written about her brother, so that helped when I wrote this. The book is a great idea. I know Sandra will treasure it. judi