Comment from Jesse James Doty

Excellent

This is so true. We need to take responsibility for our past present and future decisions.
There is no time to feel guilty. There is little time to weep and moan about what we did or didn't do in the past.
This commentary is written well and is entertaining to read. I want to take responsibility for everything that occurs in my life.
Jesse

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023

Thank you. Yes, it is my belief that we all need to take responsibily for every little thing in our life. We are the ones who think our thoughts and make our decisions. It is nobody's fault but our own when we screw up, which we all do at some point.

reply by Jesse James Doty on 27-Oct-2023

Yes, we do...all of us.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You take your responsibility seriously here and when you are determined to live a long time and care for others then I reckon it will happen, I loved your unselfish and caring post, I bet your cats and dog love you very much, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023

Thank you. It is my personnel belief that we are responsible for everything in our life, whether good or bad.

Comment from Gillian Berg Vogt

Excellent

I quite enjoyed this sentence. So much packed in with a little kick-in-the-pants reminder to boot. Delightful. I'm imagining quite the feisty elderly soul and poor Cindy, who, in my mind, is likely pretty patient and charitable in her own right. Hopefully they have a good vacuum cleaner. I myself would have made a couple of edits with commas and perhaps have moved "in your life" to the end of the sentence "...responsible for everything [in your life]"...but that's just me and commas are always a nightmare, especially in run-on sentences. A lovely entry though and very entertaining. - Gillian

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 Comment Written 27-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023

Thank you. I will take your suggestions seriously and double check the commas and in your life remark. I ran the commas through Grammarly, but they aren't always correct.

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is good work for the challenge. Your presentation is good. You use expressive words and imagery that will draw in readers.

Best wishes,

Alexandra


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 Comment Written 27-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023

Thank you. It's fun to write something short and challenging like this prompt. Win or lose, I still enjoy writing these things.