The Secret
Keeping a secret21 total reviews
Comment from JSD
I like your assured rhyme and rhythm here and the 'story' you tell is human and recognisable by us all. This is therefore an amusing and engaging post. I'm not sure they'll accept a poem as an entry but no harm in trying!
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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I like your assured rhyme and rhythm here and the 'story' you tell is human and recognisable by us all. This is therefore an amusing and engaging post. I'm not sure they'll accept a poem as an entry but no harm in trying!
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Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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Thanks, John. It looked like the field was wide open, so what to heck.