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Miranda's Trouble In Paradise

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Miranda tries to find Dougie.

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Comment from Sankey
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So good to see Miranda back with all her trials and her adopted son, Waylon, who I really like as well. Is Missy still in prison? Bring it all on, we can't wait!

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
    Missy is in jail. But she will still be heard from. Lol. Like a coo coo clock that never stops. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from Jay Squires
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Bring it on! I'm excited!

He's kind of a hippie prophet who cries over Hallmark movies. [What an encapsulating image!]

We ended up fighting where the perverts body was found. [... the pervert's body...]

This is going to bring on tons of new Miranda followers.

Jay




 Comment Written 03-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
    I'll be happy just to keep the original fans. They're her people. Lol. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I don't think I was familiar with this story the first time around Gretchen so I will have to catch up and your introduction has probably covered the basics, good luck with this one, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
    Thank you. So glad to have you on board. Gretchen
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Yep! I'm hooked already. This was a perfect summary, and done with that inimitable Miranda style: tough, funny, no BS, no excuses, take-her-or-leave-her. Myself, I'll take her any day of the week. And I can't wait to see how she digs in and figures out what's become of Dougie.

Woo-hoo! I needed this book right now! Thanks, Gretchen.

PS change out the "v" for a "b" in the sentence 'she took the whole Best friends forever way too seriously.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
    I just spotted the v. Fat southern fingers be damned. I'm still nervous but this helped. Thanks again, Rachelle. From your critiques and encouragement, I know you are one hell of of a teacher. Gretchen
reply by Rachelle Allen on 03-Sep-2023
    That's a really nice thing to say to me, Gretchen; thank you for that.
Comment from royowen
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How fascinating that is in your previous "adventures" with Missy Toblerone, that was the only loose end you didn't tie up, but it left an entrance for a follow up, and, of course how the relationship with Mitch was going, your altar ego is back, well done Greatchen, bless you, Roy
Typo : The whole (vest) friends forever. Best?

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
    Thank you. I usually leave a loose end. I never know when a character might want a second chance. Gretchen
reply by royowen on 03-Sep-2023
    Great writing Gretchen
Comment from damommy
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She's back and I'm glad. She never stops, and I like that about her. But she'll always have to be on the lookout for Missy and her evil doings. No tell what she has in store.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
    Thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Wow, Miranda gets around! My head's still spinning from her social life. And there is some unfinished business not to mention Waylon of course. So she'll be back then sorting out the mystery of Dougie's disappearance. Looking forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing Debbie

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 Comment Written 03-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
    Thanks, Debbie. So glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This rollercoaster ride of Miranda's past doings / be done to happenings is an excellent introduction to your latest novel. Now we're ready for a new ride on the dodgems. I can't wait. kay

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 Comment Written 03-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
    Thank you so much. Gretchen