Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

Auggggghhhh. I will miss her terribly. I've enjoyed her company so much these past months. Such a class act, though, will be unforgettable.

Beautifully done, Gretchen, especially the last sentence. Of course her thoughts would go to her loved one who passed first.

I'm going to promote this because I'm out of sixes. xoxo

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 Comment Written 24-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023

Thank you, but the glowing review is enough. I always appreciate your honest reviews. Gretchen

reply by Rachelle Allen on 24-Aug-2023

Too bad. I already pumped it. Deal with it, Sista!

Comment from Wendy G

Exceptional

How beautifully you have described this, sad and moving and real. Such authenticity. I am almost in tears and I know Jameson will be. Your characters are so authentic. Wonderful writing.
Wendy

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023

Thank you, Wendy. We all know what's going to happen, but sometimes a transition can be beautiful. At least in my story. I'm so glad you like this story. Gretchen

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

"Teasing me and calling me Rambo," is an authentic sounding line. I truly enjoyed reading your work. It's an excellent poem and presentation! You've used imagery and specific words that draw in a reader. Your use of Best wishes! Alexandra

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 Comment Written 24-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023

Thanks, Alexandra. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen