Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Oh I'm glad you explained the 2 bucks:) Another faultlessly written chapter, this time in the Christmas season. Fee is up to no good with the Public Defender, trying to get himself out of jail for the New Year. The dialogue continues to flesh out Fee as a thoroughly obnoxious character. And now what are the mustard seeds for? Sally, you're keeping us all guessing here. As ever, a fine and engaging read. Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2023

Forgive my late response. My birthday had some delightful company. I'm so glad you're enjoying my book. Blessings abundant,
Sal XOs

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

I enjoyed listening to the chapter as well. It moves along well, and it's very well written. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I am anxiously awaiting to see what the new glasses is that the little vision specialist has come up with to see how they help me. Did

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 Comment Written 31-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2023

Thank you for the excellent review and kind comments, Patricia. Both mean so much! Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

My pal Sal and her crew must stay alert they have no idea what the rat is up to which of course is no darb good,
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 Comment Written 31-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2023

Thank you for the excellent review and kind compliments, Barbara dear! I'm glad you enjoyed it all. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs

Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

Love it as always, Sally. Another great chapter that sped away and at pace. Now I'm looking forward to where you take this. I won't have a guess but await your next offering. I love the interaction between them all. Ulla xxx

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2023

Ulla dear, Thank you for the lovely review and generous stars and compliments. I am so blessed to have you close. See you on Sunday.
Sal XOs

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Exceptional

Okay, Sally, you simply can't leave us hanging like that. Next Tuesday is a whole week away!!!

This chapter was all power packed. I'd hardly started reading it before it evaporated! I felt you had only written a few short paragraphs. Then I looked back. A full chapter! You've got to post again this week, lol!

Actually, I know how hard it is to produce a well written chapter, but I'll just have to count the days until next week. I start back to work Wednesday, so will be distracted.

Much love,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2023

Rhonda dear, Thank you for the lovely review and super stars, my friend. I am so blessed.
Hugs and blessings,
Sal XOs