Comment from Debi Pick Marquette

Exceptional

I love Simon's granddad and I love how he had the dream and then saw Patience in a real life experience. I love how he repented and came back to the Lord, as we all know we shall come to Him as little children, as childlike souls of innocence. And that can not happen if we are holding hatred in our heart. Anyway that part was awesome.
Moving onward with old men, (that would be a good name for this chapter. LOL)
I do have compassion for the old Paulette man who lives in the cave. I don't see him as evil, but as a man who is trying to protect and help his loved son who has fallen by the wayside and under the spell of the evil Fee. Anyway, I loved how this chapter was mostly about those two old guys and quite sweet and touching. Thank you for this awesome chapter. I loved it,, as it had such a ring of calm and rebirth to it.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023

Gotta get to my Debi today! Thank you soooo much for the wonderful review and for being the first one! Your rock! The generous stars and compliments mean so much too, my friend. I'm glad you enjoy Mondays and reading me. I am blessed.

Sending you my best today as always,
The Blind Detective a.k.a. BBB XOs