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Grasping the Elusive Dream

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The Followup to Chasing the Elusive Dream

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Comment from Niki Marie
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I must admit I want to know more! Excellent delivery. I'm excited to know the trials of the baby! Nicely penned. I do say,, im a fan very! very nicely done.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2023
    Thank you for the excellent review and I'm glad you liked this. If you interested I have a book on Amazon with stories of what went on earlier. It is free on Kindle today thur Thursday. Chasing the Elusive Dream by Elizabeth Shelby
    Beth
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Wow, poor Connie, treated so badly just because she was the baby. I can speak from my own experience, that when my sister was a couple of months old, I push bread in her mouth to stop crying and I told my mom that the baby is not crying because I feed her. My mom saved the day, but I really thought I was helping out.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2023
    Thank you Iza. I really appreciate the review and comments. I'm glad to see you back. I've missed you. If you interested I have a book on Amazon with stories of what went on earlier. It is free on Kindle today thru Thursday. Chasing the Elusive Dream by Elizabeth Shelby
    Beth
Comment from Julie Lau
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Yes, every new addition causes its own problems! I myself claim the distinction of causing us to have to leave our cosy share-house because I could not be prevented from biting the hosts' daughter, of the same age.

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 Comment Written 03-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2023
    Thank you for the review and comments. So you were a bitter. LOL I have a friend who tried to give her baby sister to a repainman when she was four. If you interested I have a book on Amazon with stories of what went on earlier. It is free on Kindle today thur Thursday. Chasing the Elusive Dream by Elizabeth Shelby.
    Beth
reply by Julie Lau on 05-Jul-2023
    Thank you, Beth!
Comment from lyenochka
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Oh I remember all the teen years and you and Evan survived a lot of trials. But poor Connie! I didn't realize how much danger she was in at the hands of her siblings and that other child! God really protects our kids!

Connie was a difference experience (different)

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 Comment Written 03-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2023
    Thank you Helen. Yes, Connie had a pretty rough beginning. God seems to look after our children, when we might not realize what's going on. My Kindle version of my book is free thur Thursday on Amazon.
    Beth
reply by lyenochka on 04-Jul-2023
    You should post about your book on Kindle on Facebook! I already got my copy when you first posted! 💖
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2023
    Thanks for a great review.
    I'm supposed to be able to advertise it on my profile page but every time I try, It says first you have to update my account by paying for another year. My year isn't up till Feb. I asked Tom an he says he doesn't know why it's doing that.
    Beth
reply by lyenochka on 04-Jul-2023
    I had trouble with that, too so I gave up.