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The Followup to Chasing the Elusive Dream

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Comment from Jim Wile
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That was a very humorous story about your experience in your new locale. I especially loved the part about your mother-in-law finding the baby opposum in her bed at 3:00am.

Why is it that kids are so funny about personal items like underwear? I guess it's an innate sense of modesty that drives it. Very humorous in the context of this story, though. - Jim

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 Comment Written 25-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2023
    Thank you Jim. I'm so glad you found humor in this story. That is what I was hoping for.
    Beth