Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is another well written chapter in your book. I enjoyed listening to it. I do hope that you will have a wonderful day. May God bless you and all the writing you are doing. Patricia

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023

Dear Patricia, Thank you for the excellent review and kind compliments. Both mean the world to me. Blessings to you always.
Sal XOs

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

There's a lot that's happened in this post. We'll soon have another marriage. Does Paulette think Candance is his wife???

"Hank gazed at Betty Jo. (You don't need the quotation mark in front of 'Hank')

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023

Barbara dear, Thank you for the excellent review and insightful comments. The critique I'd most appreciated too. Blessings to you always.
Sal :))

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Lengthy, but good. Good hospital scene. Good dialog. I can remember when Dewy Long was governor and Jimmy Davis, could write and sing songs. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 26-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023

Dear Ben, Thank you for the excellent review and kind compliments. Both mean the world to me. Blessings to you always.
Sal XOs

Comment from Debi Pick Marquette

Exceptional

I love that Patience came into the room with her holy oil and gave Hank healing and the same for Betty's heart.
Oh, and now Hank is waking up and smiling at her. Now I am crying again.
This paragraph is so dang sweet.

Hmmm, wonder why you thought of a December wedding for them? Lol
Just like Betty to grab the baby so that the newlywed newly- named, newly-located can see Hank.
Isn't Willa a sister to Hank? I bet she was excited to see him awake.
What a sweet visit between Hank and Simon and Candace.
Ooooooh and the last part just made my day. I loved hearing Tommy almost lose it with Paulette, but even sweeter was hearing his rights read to him.
Take that you rotten excuse for a man... hey it isn't Christian like, but it is me acting out in the story line. Lol. Hahahah!
Awesome, Awesome , Awesome chapter. My favorite by far.... hehe!
Seriously what a wonderful chapter and it just made my week!!!!!!

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023

Thank you for the super review and generous stars, Debi dear. A Debi favorite again! My my, I must keep up the good work, mustn't I? I'm delighted and so blessed. Sending you my best today and love and blessings always.
The Blind Detective, a.k.a. BBB XOs

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Another good Chapter, Sal! I really like your dialogueS, they are clear and easy to follow. Also you always help a reader to understand what the person's thinking.

Excellent work my friend!

Alex ':)) xx

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 Comment Written 26-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023

Thank you for the excellent review and kind compliments, Alex! Both are so appreciated. I'm so glad you're enjoying my book. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo's