Coffee With Iris
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Spilling the Beans"Two opposites meet and connect.
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Comment from nancy_e_davis
Two lost souls looking for comfort to ease the pain of missing the ones they love. Everyone needs someone to talk to. Sometimes they can help us understand what happened and the why of it. How to deal with it and in his case where it went wrong. I would like to hear more of their conversation.I guess I just want to ease their pain. I understand it. Good job. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2023
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Two lost souls looking for comfort to ease the pain of missing the ones they love. Everyone needs someone to talk to. Sometimes they can help us understand what happened and the why of it. How to deal with it and in his case where it went wrong. I would like to hear more of their conversation.I guess I just want to ease their pain. I understand it. Good job. Nancy:)
Comment Written 19-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2023
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Awe. Thank you, Nancy. Sometimes just knowing someone is there helps. I'm so happy you are enjoying this story. Gretchen
Comment from Dr. Nad
Spilling the beans is another VERY good chapter in your book. I really enjoy reading about Jameson and Iris. Dialogue is crisp yet easy to read and contains a good flow that moves the story along. You don't get bogged Down in minutia or irrelevant nonsense. I appreciate the fact that you have done a fine job of editing so I don't have to in my mind! L. O. L.
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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2023
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Spilling the beans is another VERY good chapter in your book. I really enjoy reading about Jameson and Iris. Dialogue is crisp yet easy to read and contains a good flow that moves the story along. You don't get bogged Down in minutia or irrelevant nonsense. I appreciate the fact that you have done a fine job of editing so I don't have to in my mind! L. O. L.
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Comment Written 19-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2023
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Thank you. But to be honest , I hate editing. Lol. I don't guess many people like it, so thank you for the compliment. Have a great week. Gretchen
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I don't really like editing either. You may have noticed I said: "in my mind." That means I don't have to physically do the work lol. I don't like to do dialogue because of all the quotation marks. Well you are most welcome for the review and keep up the good story.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These two are opening up to each other and providing some mutual comfort and the age gap between them seems to disappear as their hearts are young. Both know grief and I expect Iris is more of a comfort to Jameson than the reverse. I enjoyed your dialogue which is smooth and authentic, love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2023
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These two are opening up to each other and providing some mutual comfort and the age gap between them seems to disappear as their hearts are young. Both know grief and I expect Iris is more of a comfort to Jameson than the reverse. I enjoyed your dialogue which is smooth and authentic, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 19-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2023
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Thanks, Dolly. I appreciate this. Gretchen
