Coffee With Iris
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Mothering Mode"Two opposites meet and connect.
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Comment from nancy_e_davis
You do this so well! You tell the story and it is like watching a movie. Example of that is in the last paragraph of this chapter. I could see him doing that. It was laid out so simply and so very real. Well done Dear! Love your writing. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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You do this so well! You tell the story and it is like watching a movie. Example of that is in the last paragraph of this chapter. I could see him doing that. It was laid out so simply and so very real. Well done Dear! Love your writing. Nancy:)
Comment Written 12-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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Thank you, Nancy. It's how I see stories. In scenes or like spying on people. (Okay, that sounded really creepy) but you get what I'm saying. Thanks for the enthusiastic review. Much appreciated. Gretchen
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Observing people. A people watcher. Nothing wrong with that. It is the best way to learn about relationships.