Guided by Faith
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Comment from jmdg1954
Good chapter, Barbara.
Everyone around Emma and Seth see the attraction brewing and are waiting gif it to mature.
Seth and Emma feel it, yet both are resisting it for different reasons.
This Crown Vic needs to be a priority with Seth if he has these feelings for Emma!
Looking forward to the next post...
John
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Good chapter, Barbara.
Everyone around Emma and Seth see the attraction brewing and are waiting gif it to mature.
Seth and Emma feel it, yet both are resisting it for different reasons.
This Crown Vic needs to be a priority with Seth if he has these feelings for Emma!
Looking forward to the next post...
John
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jay Squires
A great chapter, especially with Seth's flub and his followup and their sitting through the scary movie. I didn't know you were also frightened by them.
After numerous hiding her eyes against Seth's chest, [I don't know... this doesn't sound right. Perhaps, "After numerous times hiding her eyes against Seth's chest,"]
I can't wait for the relationship to start on a first-name basis.
Jay
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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A great chapter, especially with Seth's flub and his followup and their sitting through the scary movie. I didn't know you were also frightened by them.
After numerous hiding her eyes against Seth's chest, [I don't know... this doesn't sound right. Perhaps, "After numerous times hiding her eyes against Seth's chest,"]
I can't wait for the relationship to start on a first-name basis.
Jay
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. I added 'times'. Seth approaches it very soon, but Emma ignores the suggestion, but quickly changes her mind. LOL
Comment from BethShelby
This is good. Emma is a very sensitive girl and Seth tends to overreact. I imagine he enjoyed watching the movie with her since it gave him the chance to calm her down. I don't really like scary movies either and I refust to watch Dateline because someone has always been murdered.
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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This is good. Emma is a very sensitive girl and Seth tends to overreact. I imagine he enjoyed watching the movie with her since it gave him the chance to calm her down. I don't really like scary movies either and I refust to watch Dateline because someone has always been murdered.
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Anne Johnston
"Especially since Seth's stingy with words, and Emma wears her emotions on her sleeve." These words describe your two main characters perfectly. I like how you used the scenario of Emma watching a scary movie, and Seth rushing to her rescue, thinking she was in trouble.
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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"Especially since Seth's stingy with words, and Emma wears her emotions on her sleeve." These words describe your two main characters perfectly. I like how you used the scenario of Emma watching a scary movie, and Seth rushing to her rescue, thinking she was in trouble.
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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You are very welcome, Barbara
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, I love the slow way the relationship between Seth and Emma is evolving. I must admit I don't like horror movies too much either. Now I'm looking forward to see where you're taking this. All best, Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Hi Barbara, I love the slow way the relationship between Seth and Emma is evolving. I must admit I don't like horror movies too much either. Now I'm looking forward to see where you're taking this. All best, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Thank you for this kind review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I love Emma and Seth, they make such a cute couple. The story plot is developing nicely. I wish I had a Seth in my life. I had plenty of relationships in my life but no one like him. I love horror movies too.
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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I love Emma and Seth, they make such a cute couple. The story plot is developing nicely. I wish I had a Seth in my life. I had plenty of relationships in my life but no one like him. I love horror movies too.
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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I think most women wish for a Seth. That's the best part of romance novels.
Comment from Ben Colder
I am wondering what this Crown Victoria is all about. It keeps popping up in these people's lives. No doubt something is not good. My Mary and I never watched scary movies either.
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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I am wondering what this Crown Victoria is all about. It keeps popping up in these people's lives. No doubt something is not good. My Mary and I never watched scary movies either.
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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It's not good. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. You moved the story along nicely with Seth, believing there was an intruder, Emma's scary movie. I do not see any room for improvement.Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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This is another excellent chapter. You moved the story along nicely with Seth, believing there was an intruder, Emma's scary movie. I do not see any room for improvement.Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from nomi338
I continue to love it. Nice and slow, unhurried. Letting it build at just the right speed. Even though all around them recognize it, they pretend that it does not exist. Yet their very actions are spurring it into becoming something real. Great job of creative writing.
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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I continue to love it. Nice and slow, unhurried. Letting it build at just the right speed. Even though all around them recognize it, they pretend that it does not exist. Yet their very actions are spurring it into becoming something real. Great job of creative writing.
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement. HUGS!!
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Always.
Comment from judiverse
I think Emma needs a younger guy. Someone younger would give her her own space and not be overly protective. She probably wouldn't listen to me, as she is really becoming interested in Seth. A younger guy would probably understand about the scary movie, too. Seth totally over-reacted. If you don't do horror movies, don't watch them. The Crown Victoria is spotted again. If Seth wants to help Emma, he'd make it a priority to find out who's been stalking Emma. You're right it's a good idea to develop things slowly. I remember Dean Kuch's scary poems and stories. I think he took great delight in scaring the readers. I hope your husband is getting along well after his knee surgery.
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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I think Emma needs a younger guy. Someone younger would give her her own space and not be overly protective. She probably wouldn't listen to me, as she is really becoming interested in Seth. A younger guy would probably understand about the scary movie, too. Seth totally over-reacted. If you don't do horror movies, don't watch them. The Crown Victoria is spotted again. If Seth wants to help Emma, he'd make it a priority to find out who's been stalking Emma. You're right it's a good idea to develop things slowly. I remember Dean Kuch's scary poems and stories. I think he took great delight in scaring the readers. I hope your husband is getting along well after his knee surgery.
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. Seth will grow to understand Emma.
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You're welcome. Seth is concerned about Emma's safety, but he carries it to extremes. Rushing over to her house was unnecessary. He could have called to see if she was all right. judi