Looking for Positive in Winter
Eight more inches last week ~ Another blizzard on the way26 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When there is nowhere for the snow to go, then I expect if does cause flooding when it melts. How awful that is, and the winter should be starting to subside hopefully, a poignant poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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When there is nowhere for the snow to go, then I expect if does cause flooding when it melts. How awful that is, and the winter should be starting to subside hopefully, a poignant poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
Thank you so much for your kind review and words for this poem about our seemingly endless winters. It really could be worst. Lol
Comment from jessizero
You did a great job with the prompt. Your syllable count was correct, and you had the internal and ending rhymes. I also like the picture you supplied. I hope the weather gets better for you soon! Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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You did a great job with the prompt. Your syllable count was correct, and you had the internal and ending rhymes. I also like the picture you supplied. I hope the weather gets better for you soon! Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
Thank you so much for your kind review and words for this poem about our seemingly endless winters. It really could be worst. Lol
Comment from pome lover
Bless your heart.
I don't know where you are, but I hope it stops soon.
I used to live in the mouintains of Colorado, having moved from Georgia, and felt the same way.
Come on, sunshine!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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Bless your heart.
I don't know where you are, but I hope it stops soon.
I used to live in the mouintains of Colorado, having moved from Georgia, and felt the same way.
Come on, sunshine!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
Thank you so much for your kind review and words for this poem about our seemingly endless winters. It really could be worst. Lol
Comment from Bill Schott
This essence poem, When Will It End? has the proper formatting and seems to indicate an attitude of "Enough already!" when it comes to the extended winter weather.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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This essence poem, When Will It End? has the proper formatting and seems to indicate an attitude of "Enough already!" when it comes to the extended winter weather.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
Thank you so much for your kind review and words for this poem about our seemingly endless winters. It really could be worst. Lol
Comment from shelley kaye
i prefer the cold weather
much easier to put clothes on to get warm
then to take clothes off to stay cool lol
this was a great essence poem
i like how the inner rhyme is on the same syllable in both lines
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley ð?¦?
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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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i prefer the cold weather
much easier to put clothes on to get warm
then to take clothes off to stay cool lol
this was a great essence poem
i like how the inner rhyme is on the same syllable in both lines
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley ð?¦?
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Shelley, you are more like me than I realized even the last couple times we chatted. One word sums it up for me, and that is "menopause." Haha!
However it worries me, as I remember how damaging the floods can be. And one other thing is how hard it is on my husband every time he goes out to shovel and plow. The good news is it does end, and then we appreciate
Spring all that much more. Love your comments tho, as I hear you all too well. (Hugs)
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LOL! well i'm PREmenopausal... still get the "time of the whenevers" as i call them (i was never regular lol)
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LOL
Thank you so much for your kind review and words for this poem about our seemingly endless winters. It really could be worst. Lol
Comment from rjuselius
Haha. This is an entertaining piece of poetry dear anonymous! The inner and last line fit together perfectly. This should do well.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Haha. This is an entertaining piece of poetry dear anonymous! The inner and last line fit together perfectly. This should do well.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Thanks so much Rebekka! As always, you are so sweet. I appreciate your lovely comments so much, my friend.
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My pleasure entirely dear friend <3
Thank you so much for your kind review and words for this poem about our seemingly endless winters. It really could be worst. Lol