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The Return

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Erotic Turmoil

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Comment from alexisleech
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Great advice, Sandra, and heartfelt congratulations on publishing yet another wonderful book. As you say, the help from other fanstorians can be essential to reaching your goal, and I know I would never have achieved it without that support many years ago.
Well done!

Alexis xxx

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
    Aw thank you so much, Alexis. To see it finally in print was a lovely feeling. Thank you for another sixth star, my friend. Love you lots. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from estory
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Congratulations on reaching that milestone. I wish you much success on it. What makes writing worthwhile is finding readers and have the pieces attain new life through them. I am still editing my novel, I'm somewhat of a perfectionist, but maybe someday I'll get it out there, probably through Westbow. estory

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
    Hi estory, thank you for the lovely congratulations, I'm sure you will, just get it done. Put everything else aside for a week or two, and concentrate on your finished novel. I'll be the first in line to buy it. I agree with you about the readers. It's a wonderful thought as well to see you book being bought in other countries by people you don't know and will never meet. That is the best part of all. Get it done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I wish you luck with the sales of your new book Sandra and congratulations. Your advice is so good here, there is always room for improvement and I go back over my work and make changes all the time. Any this day is all about you and your amazing achievement, good luck Sandra, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
    Thank you so much, Dolly. I get such a buzz when I hold my book. I was strictly a children's poet when I joined here, then I went on to other styles of poetry. It was when I wrote a short story for a contest and won!!!! that I started doing more. The people here are really encouraging. Thank you, my friend. :)) Love and hugs, Sandra xx
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 14-Mar-2023
    You have come a long way Sandra and you should be proud of yourself x x x
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
    Aw, Thank you, Dolly. 😊xx
Comment from humpwhistle
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Congratulations, Sandra. Your advice to newbies is solid. Though I would caution them to chose their FS mentors carefully. It's easy to get lulled into a sense of complacency if one isn't careful.
May the Amazon 'switchboard' light up orders for The Return!

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
    That's a good point. I think once you start listening, and reading the revies, you will see which are good ones. I know some who like to think they know it, but they don't. But I couldn't put that down, lol! Thank you, my friend. I think the majority of my sales come from family and friends. I'm not good at promoting, and I don't like FB, but I'll give that one a go. Thanks, my friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xx
reply by humpwhistle on 14-Mar-2023
    Yeah, I know you can't tell the whole truth about reviewers. But anyone who sticks around for a while figures it out.
    Oddly enough for this ex-adman, I don't care to self-promote, either. I joined FB about fifteen years ago, but still don't understand why.
    Truthfully, I don't have enough friends and family to make self-publishing a viable idea.
    But Amazon is a big marketplace and unexpected things happen.
    Good luck, Doll.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
    It would be very unexpected for me. Thanks, Lee. xxxx
Comment from PoemsOfDD
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Congratulations ð?¥³ Sandra. You have accomplished much after ill health paused your flow. Your determination is admirable and your advice offers hope and encouragement to those who want to dip their toe in the book pond. Maybe I will pluck up courage to air my story on FanStory one day.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
    Thank you so very much for this lovely review and all the stars, DD! I feel so proud holding my book, and it's all thanks to you all on here. You should put your story on here, I have found 99.9% of my readers were very helpful. Some put me down, but my hubby said not to take notice of that one, concentrate on the helpful, positive reviews which far outweighed the few. Which I did. Go for it! Thank you, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from JT traveller
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First and foremost, congratulations on your publication.

Thank you for your tips and thoughts for us fellow aspiring writers. They have been taken on board and appreciated.

Thank you for sharing your stories.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
    Thank you, JT, for the congratulations. I'm glad you will take on board my tips, the help I've been given since I joined back in 2011 has been more than I could have ever wished for. Thanks again, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Pantygynt
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Thank you for this magnificent note of gratitude, which I would echo to all those who have helped and continue to help me in my endeavours in that direction, including yourself. You start here with some excellent advice to authors whether seeking publication or are here just for fun.

Every week I say 'How did I miss that?' over some error I failed to pick up prior to posting.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
    Aw thank you, Jim! You and I are alike when it comes to editing, we always find more!! Thank you for that golden star, my friend. I really appreciated that.
    F1 starts at 5:00 - 5:30 on Sunday, and it's Mothers Day, so shall we chat on Monday? :)) Sandra xx
reply by Pantygynt on 14-Mar-2023
    Monday afternoon would be good for me. See you then.
Comment from Ben Colder
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Thank you, Sandy. I will go to Amazon and look for it as I have done your others. My best wishes to you and your success in your latest. Sending you blessings toward your health as well

Chuck.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
    Aw, thank you, Chuck, that is so kind of you. After I finish this book, I'm going to do a series of short stories. Perhaps some more for my grandson. I need something that doesn't tax my worn-out brain! Lol. Love and hugs, my dear friend. :)) Sandra
    I've some catching up with your book, I'll be at it later. xxx
reply by Ben Colder on 14-Mar-2023
    Thanks, Sandy. Thinking about publishing again. And then like a bubble in the air. It pops. LOL.
Comment from Bill Schott
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Congratulations, Sandra! So very happy that you have this one out and available to the world. One day, if we all stick to it, perhaps we can join you with this success. Good job!

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
    Aw, thank you, Bill! I'm sure you could have a fabulous book of all your shorties, they always make me laugh. And, not forgetting, Pons and Ned, and the others. They are such fun stories. You should go for it. Thank you for that lovely sixth star, my friend, that was so nice of you. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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Congratulations on your latest book being out. You have had a hard time of things recently, yet you have managed to persevere and overcome all these trials and tribulations of your health (to add to the awful winter we have just gone through). Here's to the next one, kay

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
    Thank you, Kay, for the congratulations, I appreciate that. It was a bad time, but I'm almost over it. I have a hospital appointment on the 21st of this month where they are going to do some tests on my lungs. My asthma and the 3 bouts of Covid has done me no favours. I'm hoping for a really lovely summer! We deserve one after this winter. Snow in March!!! Goodness me. Thanks, my friend. :)) Sandra xx