The Aspen Grove Murders
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "The Aspen Grove Murders #16"A Tommy Thompson Mystery
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Comment from Ulla
Oh, Sally, This was such a beautiful chapter. I so enjoyed their wedding and especially the honeymoon. How romantic. I loved it.
However, now we return to reality. I can't wait to reading on. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Oh, Sally, This was such a beautiful chapter. I so enjoyed their wedding and especially the honeymoon. How romantic. I loved it.
However, now we return to reality. I can't wait to reading on. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the lovely review and cherry topped stars, Ulla dear. It means so much to me. So glad you enjoyed this chapter. Blessings always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Carol Clark2
The honeymoon scene is tastefully, but warmly, written. Tommy and Willa seem well suited to each other. I'm glad a certain female detective will soon be joining the team to hopefully put an end to this wide ring of evil. Have a blessed week. Carol
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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The honeymoon scene is tastefully, but warmly, written. Tommy and Willa seem well suited to each other. I'm glad a certain female detective will soon be joining the team to hopefully put an end to this wide ring of evil. Have a blessed week. Carol
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Dear Carol, thank you so much for the wonderful review of my book chapter. I?m so glad you enjoyed it and thought it six worthy. I?m so very honored and blessed. Sending my very best to you all, Sally XOs
Comment from royowen
That movie is a wonderful movie, and I've seen it multiple times, I think the more i see Humphrey Bogart, Sydney Greenstreet, Claude Rains, Peter Lorre and Ingrid Bergman, the more I lament modern actors, with Tommy and Willa married, it's amazing how you pull out these great episodes, one after another. Well done Sally, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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That movie is a wonderful movie, and I've seen it multiple times, I think the more i see Humphrey Bogart, Sydney Greenstreet, Claude Rains, Peter Lorre and Ingrid Bergman, the more I lament modern actors, with Tommy and Willa married, it's amazing how you pull out these great episodes, one after another. Well done Sally, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the kind review of my book chapter, dear Roy. It is always so needed and appreciated. Blessings,
Sal XOs
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Most welcome
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Oh my what a story! WOW, this is awesome!!! I had a hard time reading about all the highly sensual love scenes, For some reason, it seemed really warm in my house all of a sudden, , LOL, but I got through it, and absolutely loved it. What a beautiful couple they make...
And then the suspense at the farm house. I didn't think this story could get any more exciting, but it is really building again and I am absolutely loving it. So I am wondering if Gaston is still in a coma and where is Simon staying? I am assuming at the Jenkins farm.
Now to find out that the crime ring has reached so many different locations. This is so amazing. And if that wasn't enough, they are bringing in a detective, three of her team and her dog. But absolutely was shocked and loved the cliff hanger!!!
She is a blind detective. Oh I do hope it is that wonderful one named Sally. I have read a lot about her and she is the best. However this is not my story so I will have to wait until next week. This is really getting better all the time.
Phenomenal stuff dear friend! You do have a detective's genius mind!!!
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Oh my what a story! WOW, this is awesome!!! I had a hard time reading about all the highly sensual love scenes, For some reason, it seemed really warm in my house all of a sudden, , LOL, but I got through it, and absolutely loved it. What a beautiful couple they make...
And then the suspense at the farm house. I didn't think this story could get any more exciting, but it is really building again and I am absolutely loving it. So I am wondering if Gaston is still in a coma and where is Simon staying? I am assuming at the Jenkins farm.
Now to find out that the crime ring has reached so many different locations. This is so amazing. And if that wasn't enough, they are bringing in a detective, three of her team and her dog. But absolutely was shocked and loved the cliff hanger!!!
She is a blind detective. Oh I do hope it is that wonderful one named Sally. I have read a lot about her and she is the best. However this is not my story so I will have to wait until next week. This is really getting better all the time.
Phenomenal stuff dear friend! You do have a detective's genius mind!!!
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Aw, thank you for the wonderful review and super stars, Debi dear. How kind and generous you are! I?m so glad you enjoyed it all. Yep, it got a little hot here too. Mr. Law and I love each that way too. Sending you my very best and love and blessings always.
Sal XOs
Comment from patcelaw
This is an extremely well written chapter and I enjoyed the reading of it. I do wish you the very best in writing your novel. Have a wonderful blessed day. Patricia
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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This is an extremely well written chapter and I enjoyed the reading of it. I do wish you the very best in writing your novel. Have a wonderful blessed day. Patricia
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for stopping into my book, dear Patricia. I?m so glad you enjoyed it. You have a blessed day too and I hope to see you soon. Sally XOs
Comment from Shirley McLain
So, the blind detective is coming. She'll have the case solved in no time. You did a great job as usual. Sorry, I don't have another six or you would have it. Have a wonderful day. Shirley
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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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So, the blind detective is coming. She'll have the case solved in no time. You did a great job as usual. Sorry, I don't have another six or you would have it. Have a wonderful day. Shirley
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Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review of my book chapter. Yes, I?m going to drop in on this one and give them a little help. I have a hard time. Everybody needs a little help every now and then! Wink! Sending along my very best to you all, Sally XOs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this beautiful love story with us. I also enjoyed the scene from Casablanca, it's one of my favorites.
Chase Levins had come, and brought us a gift card and spoke to us personally. (you can drop the comma after 'come')
It was around three a.m. when I awoke from the sweetest sleep, (did you mean three p.m.??? I'm not sure why this early in the morning would be a surprise unless it's the next day)
"You're an incredible lover, my husband," she sighed, kissing my lips. (husband." She sighed..)
Something in her eyes flickered a sadness, so I continued. "I happened to notice a little blood on the sheets. I hope I wasn't too...." (continued, "I)
We lived in a small apartment complex with a sprawling back yard that abutted an apple orchard. (backyard)
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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you for sharing this beautiful love story with us. I also enjoyed the scene from Casablanca, it's one of my favorites.
Chase Levins had come, and brought us a gift card and spoke to us personally. (you can drop the comma after 'come')
It was around three a.m. when I awoke from the sweetest sleep, (did you mean three p.m.??? I'm not sure why this early in the morning would be a surprise unless it's the next day)
"You're an incredible lover, my husband," she sighed, kissing my lips. (husband." She sighed..)
Something in her eyes flickered a sadness, so I continued. "I happened to notice a little blood on the sheets. I hope I wasn't too...." (continued, "I)
We lived in a small apartment complex with a sprawling back yard that abutted an apple orchard. (backyard)
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Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and helpful critique. It?s so appreciated. Sending along my very best to you all, Sally XOs