Heart Crafted Poems - 2023
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Comment from jmdg1954
A nicely composed poem regarding the strength and love within the family bond.
Reading was nice and smooth, with an unforced rhyme.
Best of luck in the contest.
Cheers to family bonds.
John
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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A nicely composed poem regarding the strength and love within the family bond.
Reading was nice and smooth, with an unforced rhyme.
Best of luck in the contest.
Cheers to family bonds.
John
Comment Written 08-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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John, thanks for the validtion.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Family truly is everything. I love the surprise in the first two stanzas. How did I get these kids. Lol. Then by the third, can't help but laugh. It wad meant to be. And lucky for you, you like them. There's a lot to be said about that. Great job. I really enjoyed reading this. Gretchen
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Family truly is everything. I love the surprise in the first two stanzas. How did I get these kids. Lol. Then by the third, can't help but laugh. It wad meant to be. And lucky for you, you like them. There's a lot to be said about that. Great job. I really enjoyed reading this. Gretchen
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Gretchen thanks ...
Comment from royowen
Well done with this difficult format of abab cccc dddd, attempting two stanzas of such. Oh yes, indeed, family ate extremely important, and you've done a very good job on this one, beautifully wrutten, good luck, blessings Roy
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Well done with this difficult format of abab cccc dddd, attempting two stanzas of such. Oh yes, indeed, family ate extremely important, and you've done a very good job on this one, beautifully wrutten, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Thank you Roy!
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Well done