The Aspen Grove Murders
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "The Aspen Grove Murders #13"A Tommy Thompson Mystery
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Comment from Mary Shifman
I can't wait to see what happens next! I sure hope Tommy's brain tumor doesn't throw a wrench in his plans for a future with Willa. I look forward to the next installment!
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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I can't wait to see what happens next! I sure hope Tommy's brain tumor doesn't throw a wrench in his plans for a future with Willa. I look forward to the next installment!
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for your excellent review and enthusiasm, dear Mary. It means so much to me. Thank you again and have a wonderful week. Sally XOs
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You are welcome. I always get into your stories!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a wonderful chapter even though Tommy and Willa had bad news. A reoccurring tumor again. You make this chapter sounds so realistic. Your chapters have a plot which is always imaginable.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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What a wonderful chapter even though Tommy and Willa had bad news. A reoccurring tumor again. You make this chapter sounds so realistic. Your chapters have a plot which is always imaginable.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for the great review of my book chapter. It means so much to me. See you next week! Sally XOs
Comment from Shirley McLain
This is a sad chapter. Maybe you'll have God heal him and everyone can live happily ever after. You did a great job, as always. It was well written and certainly held my attention. Have a blessed day. Shirley
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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This is a sad chapter. Maybe you'll have God heal him and everyone can live happily ever after. You did a great job, as always. It was well written and certainly held my attention. Have a blessed day. Shirley
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and glorious six star rating. It means so much to me and has blessed me good! I have formed this around my own true life story because my love and marriage has been tested and purified many times. I?m glad you enjoyed it, and are staying with me.
Sending along my very best to you all, and love and blessings always. Happy Valentine?s Day too!
Sal XOs
Comment from royowen
That's the only promise we can make to someone else, that we will love while there is great breath in our bodies. One could never blame Willa for wanting children with her chosen one, nor anyone could, after all God put it there! Beautifully written dear Sally, blessings Roy
Typo : Willa took all my pain away with (her) loving gaze.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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That's the only promise we can make to someone else, that we will love while there is great breath in our bodies. One could never blame Willa for wanting children with her chosen one, nor anyone could, after all God put it there! Beautifully written dear Sally, blessings Roy
Typo : Willa took all my pain away with (her) loving gaze.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review of my book chapter, dear Roy. It means so much to me. I appreciate you catching that missed word, and I have repaired it. Sending along my very best to you and yours as always, Sally XOs
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My pleasure Sally
Comment from Ulla
Sally, this just too awful, what is happening, I mean. How can fate be so mean? Maybe their love and deep faith will see them through.
This is just so well written, dear friend. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Sally, this just too awful, what is happening, I mean. How can fate be so mean? Maybe their love and deep faith will see them through.
This is just so well written, dear friend. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for the lovely review and generous six star rating, dear Uula! It?s so appreciated and needed. I?m glad you?re enjoying the story and the love story within the story. Sending along my very best and Happy Valentine?s Day to you, Sally.XOs
Comment from Lobber
Just one little tip from someone who has stayed in hospitals far too many times*, one rarely, if ever, learns (or would ever use) the last name of a nurse -- part tradition, part security.
- Lobber
*20 stays in in the last years and twice this year
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Just one little tip from someone who has stayed in hospitals far too many times*, one rarely, if ever, learns (or would ever use) the last name of a nurse -- part tradition, part security.
- Lobber
*20 stays in in the last years and twice this year
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the excellent review and comments. This is FanStory fiction for now and having Debi Marquette as a nurse in these chapters is something I wanted to do to bless her. When published outside of FS, I will remove her last name to respect her privacy.
Sending you my very best. Sal :))
Comment from Carol Clark2
Great chapter! It's filled with love, which is fun for all, and now a recurring brain tumor, which is not so much fun for Tommy and Willa. I like that Willa was able to give Tommy the news, rather than the doctor, and I like Tommy's hopeful response. Blessings. Carol
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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Great chapter! It's filled with love, which is fun for all, and now a recurring brain tumor, which is not so much fun for Tommy and Willa. I like that Willa was able to give Tommy the news, rather than the doctor, and I like Tommy's hopeful response. Blessings. Carol
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Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the lovely review of my book chapter, dear Carol. It is so appreciated. I?m glad you?re enjoying this twist and hoping for the best. Sending you my very best.
Sal XOs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
There is no way Tommy can die from a brain tumor. Some miracle has to happen, and he survives it. Really it does. We all care for him way too much. Thank you for sharing this story with us.
Willa came back the next morning around ten o'clock with a Mary Poppins-size bag of surprises. (back the following morning)
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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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There is no way Tommy can die from a brain tumor. Some miracle has to happen, and he survives it. Really it does. We all care for him way too much. Thank you for sharing this story with us.
Willa came back the next morning around ten o'clock with a Mary Poppins-size bag of surprises. (back the following morning)
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Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind comments, dear Barbara. Both are so appreciated. Hang on, love and God will prevail. Sending you a big hug for rooting him on, and blessings always.
Sal XOs
