The Aspen Grove Murders
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Comment from royowen
It's good to see a post where the heavenly beings are engaged in warfare, of course we know the outcome of ant battle between the heavenly beings will turn, we have been given advance notice, but hatred is a strong motive, and the devil and his cronies have that in spades. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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It's good to see a post where the heavenly beings are engaged in warfare, of course we know the outcome of ant battle between the heavenly beings will turn, we have been given advance notice, but hatred is a strong motive, and the devil and his cronies have that in spades. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Roy dear, Thank you so much for the kind review of my book chapter. I?m so glad you?re enjoying it and the spiritual theme. Sending along my very best to you and yours as always,
Sally :)) XOs
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Well done
Comment from Ulla
Hi Sally, this is just so well written and the story line is exciting and really fascinating. Fantasy story is not my favourite, but you do manage to catch and hold my attention. Now what?
Hugs, Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Hi Sally, this is just so well written and the story line is exciting and really fascinating. Fantasy story is not my favourite, but you do manage to catch and hold my attention. Now what?
Hugs, Ulla xxx
Comment Written 16-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Ulla dear, Thank you so much for the great review of my book chapter. The generous stars have blessed me so! I?m so glad you?re enjoying it and the spiritual theme.
Sending along my very best, and blessings always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Heather Knight
This is a very interesting story, Sally.
I love the illustration, but my favourite part is the immediacy of the first person and how good you are at writing it.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023
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This is a very interesting story, Sally.
I love the illustration, but my favourite part is the immediacy of the first person and how good you are at writing it.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind stars, Heather dear! I'm glad you enjoyed my book chapter. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Shirley McLain
What a great chapter. I especially like the fact that the Lord's Angel came and kicked some butt. You did a great job and I'm ready to read the next installment. Enjoy your day. Shirley
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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What a great chapter. I especially like the fact that the Lord's Angel came and kicked some butt. You did a great job and I'm ready to read the next installment. Enjoy your day. Shirley
Comment Written 16-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Dear Shirley, Thank you so much for the super kind review of my book chapter. The stars are pretty pleasing!! I?m so glad you?re enjoying it in the spiritual theme.
Sending along my very best to you and yours as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Mary Shifman
The angel, Patience, has many guises, it would seem, and she is certainly handy to have around! I particularly liked this sentence: "This was a Patience I had never seen, clad in full warrior dress." It went with the image quite well. Very interesting chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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The angel, Patience, has many guises, it would seem, and she is certainly handy to have around! I particularly liked this sentence: "This was a Patience I had never seen, clad in full warrior dress." It went with the image quite well. Very interesting chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for the kind review of my book chapter. I?m so glad you?re enjoying it and the spiritual theme. Sending along my very best to you and yours as always, Sally :))
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You are welcome.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this addition with us. I've said it before but this is your best novel, yet. I am really enjoying it.
"Getting a little rusty aren't you, cursed one?" she laughed. (capital 's' needed on 'she', laughed isn't a speech tag)
"Yes, Mighty Patience!" The spirit birds said in unison. (lower case 't' on 'the', said is a speech tag.)
"Go... ! Go...! Go...!" The angel cheered until the (lower case 't' on 'the', cheered is a speech tag.)
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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Thank you for sharing this addition with us. I've said it before but this is your best novel, yet. I am really enjoying it.
"Getting a little rusty aren't you, cursed one?" she laughed. (capital 's' needed on 'she', laughed isn't a speech tag)
"Yes, Mighty Patience!" The spirit birds said in unison. (lower case 't' on 'the', said is a speech tag.)
"Go... ! Go...! Go...!" The angel cheered until the (lower case 't' on 'the', cheered is a speech tag.)
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Dear Barbara, Thank you so much for the kind review of my book chapter. The catches are greatly appreciated and needed. I?m so glad you?re enjoying it in the spiritual theme. Sending along my very best to you and yours as always, Sal XOs
