You are the Sunshine
a message of love30 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
What a beautiful message of love! The author's words are engaging,
descriptive and creative. The poem reminded me of the song "You are
My Sunshine". The poem expresses vivid words and details of true love.
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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What a beautiful message of love! The author's words are engaging,
descriptive and creative. The poem reminded me of the song "You are
My Sunshine". The poem expresses vivid words and details of true love.
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you for this stellar review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from June Sargent
What an uplifting piece that captures the joy of a loving relationship. The lovely imagery of sunshine in the day and moonlight at night creates a sense of peace snd true contentment. That's how you should feel.
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What an uplifting piece that captures the joy of a loving relationship. The lovely imagery of sunshine in the day and moonlight at night creates a sense of peace snd true contentment. That's how you should feel.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you June for this stellar review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Tom Horonzy
A message of love? Indeed! simplistic but deep sharing how love feels in the truest sense. Well done. 'nuff said. Bye. T.H. ............................................................
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A message of love? Indeed! simplistic but deep sharing how love feels in the truest sense. Well done. 'nuff said. Bye. T.H. ............................................................
Comment Written 10-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you Tom for your kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Blessings
Janet
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May 2023 be your best yet
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
A lovely expression of love, using the sun's warmth and the light of both sun and moon to compare to that which your love brings you.
The image of the sun rising on a new day is a good choice for this poem. Good luck in the contest.
Pam
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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A lovely expression of love, using the sun's warmth and the light of both sun and moon to compare to that which your love brings you.
The image of the sun rising on a new day is a good choice for this poem. Good luck in the contest.
Pam
Comment Written 10-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you Pam for this stellar review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Very delicately woven, your poem feels like a caress on silk. The words are like surrendered breaths of love. Two beautiful quatrains in a perfect iambic pentameter.
Great song of love!!
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Very delicately woven, your poem feels like a caress on silk. The words are like surrendered breaths of love. Two beautiful quatrains in a perfect iambic pentameter.
Great song of love!!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you Mario for this stellar review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Goodadvicechan
The world needs sunshine to live. We need people who are sunshines to us to keep
us growing and contribute our services back to our community.
I like this sentence, " A message that I'm yours and you are mine." to me, it show the bond between the sunshine and us.
Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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The world needs sunshine to live. We need people who are sunshines to us to keep
us growing and contribute our services back to our community.
I like this sentence, " A message that I'm yours and you are mine." to me, it show the bond between the sunshine and us.
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 10-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you for this encouraging and kind review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Wendy G
Very beautiful! Very smooth rhyme and metre, and a very nice theme of love described with very lyrical words. It could have been in a Love Poem competition, as well, but wherever it is it will surely do well. Best wishes.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Very beautiful! Very smooth rhyme and metre, and a very nice theme of love described with very lyrical words. It could have been in a Love Poem competition, as well, but wherever it is it will surely do well. Best wishes.
Wendy
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Comment Written 10-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you Wendy for your thoughtful and kind review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Douglas Goff
This is very, very, very splendid. Oh wait . . . one more is coming . . . VERY!
The color scheme matches the photo and works well to create a stimulating visual effect.
I like your use of colors throughout the poem and couldn't pick a specific favorite line as I liked them all.
I rarely give 6 stars to poetry, but this earned it. Well down Master Poet!
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This is very, very, very splendid. Oh wait . . . one more is coming . . . VERY!
The color scheme matches the photo and works well to create a stimulating visual effect.
I like your use of colors throughout the poem and couldn't pick a specific favorite line as I liked them all.
I rarely give 6 stars to poetry, but this earned it. Well down Master Poet!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you Douglas for this stellar review. I am honored to receive one of your sixes. BTW - this won the contest so I feel especially blessed.
Blessings to your and yours
Janet
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I expected no less!
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This is a poem about love and the ways in which the speaker's loved one is present in the natural world. The language is romantic and the rhyme scheme is consistent, creating a flowing and poetic structure. The imagery of the morning dew, the pine tree, the cobalt blue sky, and the moonlight on the mountain lake is evocative and adds to the overall beauty of the poem. Overall, it is a well-written and heartfelt piece.
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This is a poem about love and the ways in which the speaker's loved one is present in the natural world. The language is romantic and the rhyme scheme is consistent, creating a flowing and poetic structure. The imagery of the morning dew, the pine tree, the cobalt blue sky, and the moonlight on the mountain lake is evocative and adds to the overall beauty of the poem. Overall, it is a well-written and heartfelt piece.
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2023
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Thank you Jasmine for this stellar review. I appreciate your detailed and encouraging comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from poetwatch
A very lovely way with words that say, "I love you" author. I took you only two stanzas to bring the sunshine into the heart of the reader. It is very good. :) This is an excellent entry for the Two Stanza Poem Contest. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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A very lovely way with words that say, "I love you" author. I took you only two stanzas to bring the sunshine into the heart of the reader. It is very good. :) This is an excellent entry for the Two Stanza Poem Contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you for this stellar review and the beautiful six stars. I appreciate your kind comments. BTW - it was the contest.
Blessings
Janet