The Aspen Grove Murders
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "The Aspen Grove Murders #7"A Tommy Thompson Mystery
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Comment from Susan Newell
Sally,
This is really compounding my interest! I can't wait to see where you take this and to learn more about Fee. I noted a couple typos below. Otherwise "most excellent."
Sue
Four great eagle's circled about the tower waiting for the angel's command. ==> eagles
I will be glad to clarify the report in anyway I can. ==> any way
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Sally,
This is really compounding my interest! I can't wait to see where you take this and to learn more about Fee. I noted a couple typos below. Otherwise "most excellent."
Sue
Four great eagle's circled about the tower waiting for the angel's command. ==> eagles
I will be glad to clarify the report in anyway I can. ==> any way
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the wonderful review and kind help. I have made the changes. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
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Most welcome, Sally.
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
This is an interesting mingling of the supernatural and very day to day settings! The open conflict between the Angel and the demon is well described- I like the idea of an Angel with a razor!
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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This is an interesting mingling of the supernatural and very day to day settings! The open conflict between the Angel and the demon is well described- I like the idea of an Angel with a razor!
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Sarah, thank you for the lovely review and fun comments. I really appreciate you stopping by for a R&R. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))
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happy NEW YEAR FROM Cambridge, UK
Comment from Carol Clark2
An interesting battle between Patience and DeeCayed. I like that they switch forms from angel to human. So glad DeeCayed is out of the picture now. Levins seems to know much about what's going on. I hope he is not also involved in the evil plot. Good chapter! Blessings for 2023. Carol
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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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An interesting battle between Patience and DeeCayed. I like that they switch forms from angel to human. So glad DeeCayed is out of the picture now. Levins seems to know much about what's going on. I hope he is not also involved in the evil plot. Good chapter! Blessings for 2023. Carol
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Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the excellent review and comments. Both mean so much. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
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You're welcome. Definitely my pleasure!
Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I really like this story and can't wait to read more.
The angel masquerading as an IT technician looked it over, and said, "It will be costly. (you can put a period after 'over' and omit 'and said,'. I think it makes a stronger story. There are a few other places you can do the same thing.)
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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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I really like this story and can't wait to read more.
The angel masquerading as an IT technician looked it over, and said, "It will be costly. (you can put a period after 'over' and omit 'and said,'. I think it makes a stronger story. There are a few other places you can do the same thing.)
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Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the wonderful review and generous help. I have the area you mentioned repaired. Sending you my best today as always and blessings for the new year! Happy birthday, too!
Sal XOs
