Death By Murder
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Death By Murder - Chap 25"A jewel heist, rival gangs and a cold case.
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Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
This episode gains its effect from the contrast between brutality and violence and the happy mood of Crissy until she discovers the scene of
a gang murder! the reader awaits the intervention of the FBI.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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This episode gains its effect from the contrast between brutality and violence and the happy mood of Crissy until she discovers the scene of
a gang murder! the reader awaits the intervention of the FBI.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read this chapter. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good chapter that is full of excitement and not knowing what is going to happen next. Now I am ready for the next chapter to see what happens now, Great descriptive words and great dialogue. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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This is a very good chapter that is full of excitement and not knowing what is going to happen next. Now I am ready for the next chapter to see what happens now, Great descriptive words and great dialogue. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter, Teri. It seemed to explode inside my head this morning, demanding to be written. I hope that means my muse has great ideas in mind.
smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh brilliant, Garth will be there and then he'll start his digging! I like Garth. I think Crissy is going to become a rather sort out reporter soon! I want those nasty toe-rags caught, too. I liked Mason and Paddy, and want their murder avenged!!!! Well done again, Carol! I just love your stories. Love and hugs, Sandra xxxx
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Oh brilliant, Garth will be there and then he'll start his digging! I like Garth. I think Crissy is going to become a rather sort out reporter soon! I want those nasty toe-rags caught, too. I liked Mason and Paddy, and want their murder avenged!!!! Well done again, Carol! I just love your stories. Love and hugs, Sandra xxxx
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Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much, Sandra. The story idea seemed to write itself this morning and I couldn't wait to get it down on paper to see where it might go. I was pleased by a very special friend who urged me to post and then she plaster a ton of member pumps to promote it. The tears are rolling. I just hope the chapter meets her expectations and everyone else's. I was excited with the idea.
I am blessed as always - Hugs, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
You're good at working these new characters into the story. I'm truly enjoying each new chapter you write. This one is full of action, and I loved it. Keep writing and I will keep reading.
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You're good at working these new characters into the story. I'm truly enjoying each new chapter you write. This one is full of action, and I loved it. Keep writing and I will keep reading.
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Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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This idea just exploding in my head this morning and I couldn't wait to get it down on paper. With the help of a very special friend, it has been promoted far beyond. I hope everyone enjoys it.
Smiles and hugs, Carol