Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

This is a great entry to the 5-7-5 poetry contest. I found your post very comical to which my mind went in a variety of directions. First and foremost it brought back memories of my childhood as well as the snow days I enjoyed with my own kids growing up.

Best of luck in the contest.

Cheers, John

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022

Thank you, John, for the great review. Bill

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Bill, This is a very interesting and well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very interesting and good words and very neat imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

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 Comment Written 12-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022

Thank you, Teri

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Aw, Bill, this is perfect for this prompt. A delightful poem in 5-7-5 poetry. Watch out for the flying snowball! Sending you my best today as always and my best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs

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 Comment Written 12-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022

Thank you, Sal