Mommy Cares
a 575 poem on mother's love24 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a really great 5-7-5 poem you have penned about the care of a mother for her child. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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This is a really great 5-7-5 poem you have penned about the care of a mother for her child. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Thanks a lot Teri for the very warm and positive review. God bless.
Comment from Eternal Muse
A beautiful poem about the healing magic of mother's love. They say, mother's love is like a warm blanket.
Liked "ice cream healing." A great artwork to accompany. Great imagery, visuals and artistic presentation. I enjoyed this.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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A beautiful poem about the healing magic of mother's love. They say, mother's love is like a warm blanket.
Liked "ice cream healing." A great artwork to accompany. Great imagery, visuals and artistic presentation. I enjoyed this.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Thanks a lot for enjoying the visuals and imagery of this piece, thanks too, for the five stars.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a sweet 5-7-5 poem. The text is a good size. The message is clearly stated about the care from a mom. The AN note reinforces the message from the poem. I would have not put "whatever" in the AN. It's almost dismissive of the experiences of others. The visual fits perfectly.
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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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This is a sweet 5-7-5 poem. The text is a good size. The message is clearly stated about the care from a mom. The AN note reinforces the message from the poem. I would have not put "whatever" in the AN. It's almost dismissive of the experiences of others. The visual fits perfectly.
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Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Thanks a lot for the very intelligent and positive review. God bless.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Sherry SG
I liked the contrasting imagery of the warm hands with the cold of the ice cream and yet they both signify and bring a delicious comforting feeling ! Innovative.
Personally, I don't like cold things when I'm recovering from anything so your explanation helped me to understand your view point. ;)
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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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I liked the contrasting imagery of the warm hands with the cold of the ice cream and yet they both signify and bring a delicious comforting feeling ! Innovative.
Personally, I don't like cold things when I'm recovering from anything so your explanation helped me to understand your view point. ;)
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Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Thanks a lot Sherry for the preceptive review. God bless.