Sweet Dance
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Comment from WriterHeather
This is lovely and imaginative. Only six words, yet you managed to paint an image in the mind of the reader, and a feeling of joy. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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This is lovely and imaginative. Only six words, yet you managed to paint an image in the mind of the reader, and a feeling of joy. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Comment from Tom Horonzy
and if it flickers it does on a breeze, incapable of cooling but devouring its flame if the flow is sufficiently capable. Still, the image of shadows dancing
is a flamingo in a Spanish port of call.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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and if it flickers it does on a breeze, incapable of cooling but devouring its flame if the flow is sufficiently capable. Still, the image of shadows dancing
is a flamingo in a Spanish port of call.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Comment from Tina Crute
This little poem has impact! You create drama by the use of small font under the "big screen." What I like best is that it makes me imagine the shadows are dancing FOR the candle, like the candle turned on the light and set the stage for shadows to dance around. Good luck in the contest. I think you will do well.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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This little poem has impact! You create drama by the use of small font under the "big screen." What I like best is that it makes me imagine the shadows are dancing FOR the candle, like the candle turned on the light and set the stage for shadows to dance around. Good luck in the contest. I think you will do well.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Welcome, author!
Comment from Janet Foor
A lovely message in this well written six word poem for the contest.
perfect artwork to compliment your work.
Creative, clever word choice, and vivid imagery.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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A lovely message in this well written six word poem for the contest.
perfect artwork to compliment your work.
Creative, clever word choice, and vivid imagery.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
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Comment from mermaids
I like the image you create in your words. The flame of a candle does produce shadows that appear to dance. It is fun to watch the shadows. Excellent short poem for the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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I like the image you create in your words. The flame of a candle does produce shadows that appear to dance. It is fun to watch the shadows. Excellent short poem for the contest.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Comment from dragonpoet
Good metaphor for the movement of the candle flame and shadows.
The poem is a good mix of words and artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Good metaphor for the movement of the candle flame and shadows.
The poem is a good mix of words and artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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You're welcome.
Joan
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is interesting and entertaining to read. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is interesting and entertaining to read. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and well written six word poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings Teri
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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This is a very nice and well written six word poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings Teri
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
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Comment from Goodadvicechan
This is a good entry for the contest.
The picture helps to show the sweet dance.
To me, This reminds me of having a dinner and a sweet dance during the dating period.
Thanks for sharing such a sweet poem.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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This is a good entry for the contest.
The picture helps to show the sweet dance.
To me, This reminds me of having a dinner and a sweet dance during the dating period.
Thanks for sharing such a sweet poem.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Very clever! This is a fabulous six word poem, and beautifully illustrates what a single flame can create. Dancing shadows on our walls! Very well done, this is a wonderful contest entry and I wish you the very best of luck. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Very clever! This is a fabulous six word poem, and beautifully illustrates what a single flame can create. Dancing shadows on our walls! Very well done, this is a wonderful contest entry and I wish you the very best of luck. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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