Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Oh damn! That is a nightmare, I hope and pray I will never have to awaken to. How tragic a thing that would be. Thanks for the downer story of the week. You really know how to scare the hell out of a guy. LOL.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022

My biggest fear is waking up alone someday.

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

I think this is THE best flash fiction story I have ever read. You have paid your reader the great compliment of treating him as being intelligent. Thank you Kate xx

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022

Thank you, Kate. Reworked it several times to make it clear.

Comment from NANCY V. FORREST

Excellent

Yes, that is true nightmare and finely depicted the limited number of words. It is difficult to imagine something greatly worse than the loss so clearly implied.

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 Comment Written 18-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022

Thank you, Nancy, for giving this a look.

reply by NANCY V. FORREST on 18-Jun-2022

:-)

Comment from Erika Seshadri

Excellent

This is a great entry for the 75 Words Flash Fiction Contest. It is very clear from beginning to end, and the last line offers a real punch.

Well done! Have a beautiful weekend.
Erika

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 Comment Written 18-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022

Thank you, Erika, for the great review.