My Worst Fear Realized
The worst time of my life27 total reviews
Comment from Timmory Pisciotta
I am so sorry for your loss, this was heartbreaking from beginning to end. I cannot imagine the pain that you were in. Thank you for writing this and thank you for putting it out into the world.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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I am so sorry for your loss, this was heartbreaking from beginning to end. I cannot imagine the pain that you were in. Thank you for writing this and thank you for putting it out into the world.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for the good wishes. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend.
It's a NICE piece of Biographical Non-Fiction having lucid as well as PERFECTLY matching the theme phraseology, CAPTIVATING flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and TRANSPARENTLY depicting the TRAGEDY related to Danny's demise!
Just like LIVE description!!
BEST OF LUCK IN THE CONTEST.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Hello Friend.
It's a NICE piece of Biographical Non-Fiction having lucid as well as PERFECTLY matching the theme phraseology, CAPTIVATING flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and TRANSPARENTLY depicting the TRAGEDY related to Danny's demise!
Just like LIVE description!!
BEST OF LUCK IN THE CONTEST.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for the good wishes and thank you for the six stars.. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
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Hi, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from royowen
How sad this really is, I think you're right, losing a child is possibly the worst thing that can happen to anyone I think, and I've been fortunate. We visited a mining town and saw the infant loss of life locally was historically horrendous, because of medical advances it's less likely, but still it happens way too much, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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How sad this really is, I think you're right, losing a child is possibly the worst thing that can happen to anyone I think, and I've been fortunate. We visited a mining town and saw the infant loss of life locally was historically horrendous, because of medical advances it's less likely, but still it happens way too much, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Roy. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
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Most welcome
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a wonderful and very sad story about life traumas. It sounds like you have had a few hardships; so glad that things turned out better for you and your present wife. Life can be so unexpected. I sure hope you get to see your little girl who is now grown up.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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What a wonderful and very sad story about life traumas. It sounds like you have had a few hardships; so glad that things turned out better for you and your present wife. Life can be so unexpected. I sure hope you get to see your little girl who is now grown up.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Eunice Amero
Wow how sad. That is my fear all the time if l didnt trust God would take care of them. Then you go lose your mom then your wife what a blow below the belt. I feel so bad for you. Sad story but written well. Good luck
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Wow how sad. That is my fear all the time if l didnt trust God would take care of them. Then you go lose your mom then your wife what a blow below the belt. I feel so bad for you. Sad story but written well. Good luck
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for the good wishes. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
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You are most welcome
Comment from LJbutterfly
Wow! This is a powerful, heart wrenching, and emotional story, some parts of which I'm sure some FanStorians relate to. I lost a baby, and the next time I became pregnant, I had bad death dreams, and walked on eggshells. I can't begin to imagine how it felt to have a young child suffer and then pass. Your storytelling is direct, unpretentious, and relatable. I'm glad it ended on a happy and positive note. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Wow! This is a powerful, heart wrenching, and emotional story, some parts of which I'm sure some FanStorians relate to. I lost a baby, and the next time I became pregnant, I had bad death dreams, and walked on eggshells. I can't begin to imagine how it felt to have a young child suffer and then pass. Your storytelling is direct, unpretentious, and relatable. I'm glad it ended on a happy and positive note. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for the good wishes. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from jessizero
I am so sorry for your loss. Your piece was well-written, but heartbreaking. I was truly upset for you and your family. I am glad you found new love and that it lasted, but I am still sorry for what you went through. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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I am so sorry for your loss. Your piece was well-written, but heartbreaking. I was truly upset for you and your family. I am glad you found new love and that it lasted, but I am still sorry for what you went through. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.