Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

That was a set-up orchestrated by Pat, and Ali needs to let Cord explain. Some people are just out to destroy others, and he and that woman seem to be just that. Ooh I'm so mad!! This is another excellent chapter, Barbara. Well done! :)) Sandra xx

I'm not sure if you have the right word below, but it might be different in the US.

"I don't believe in consequences.(coincidences)

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 Comment Written 20-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022

I need to change that word. DARN!!! I did it again. Thank you. Cord will get a chance to explain.

reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 20-Mar-2022

I knew the final chapter of your other novel was coming today, and wanted to save the six for that one. I am enjoying this story too! xxx

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022

Thank you.

Comment from Annmuma

Excellent

Your use of dialogue is superb. It makes the characters become real and allows the reader to pick and choose whom they like. I'm looking forward to every chapter as this story grows. ann

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 Comment Written 20-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022

Thank you for the kind review.