God On Dawn
Tonight, God made Dawn an Angel26 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
And as life on earth ends, God determines how our spirit moves forward, blessing us or condemning evil to hell. Very well chosen for the contest. Good luck!
Smiles as always
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And as life on earth ends, God determines how our spirit moves forward, blessing us or condemning evil to hell. Very well chosen for the contest. Good luck!
Smiles as always
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
Comment from Terry Broxson
Well, Ron did violate one of the Ten Commandments, what did he expect? Rules are rules, you do the crime, you do the time. Unless of course, you have a really good lawyer. Ron didn't. An excellent entry for this contest, good luck. Good work.
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Well, Ron did violate one of the Ten Commandments, what did he expect? Rules are rules, you do the crime, you do the time. Unless of course, you have a really good lawyer. Ron didn't. An excellent entry for this contest, good luck. Good work.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
Comment from Aspiring2Write
Very good. You are precise with the rules of this contest. That is a great thing. There was a contest in which I was confused by some of details. Wishing you the best in your future writing.
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Very good. You are precise with the rules of this contest. That is a great thing. There was a contest in which I was confused by some of details. Wishing you the best in your future writing.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
Comment from Earl Corp
That was a short and sweet entry into the spiritual fiction contest. I know that writing something with that few words is hard. Kudos for getting a complete story in. Good luck in the contest.
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That was a short and sweet entry into the spiritual fiction contest. I know that writing something with that few words is hard. Kudos for getting a complete story in. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
Comment from dmt1967
This is a sad poem. I thought god forgave everybody. This is a well written story. The only thing I would say that, maybe, at the end say the devil claimed his soul. Only a suggestion. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Take care.
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This is a sad poem. I thought god forgave everybody. This is a well written story. The only thing I would say that, maybe, at the end say the devil claimed his soul. Only a suggestion. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Take care.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Alcreator a fantastic Friday to you. I hope this finds you well. I liked your 42 word spiritual contest entry, I think you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Hello Alcreator a fantastic Friday to you. I hope this finds you well. I liked your 42 word spiritual contest entry, I think you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
