Football - A Novel
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Comment from Judy Lawless
This is another well-written and interesting chapter, Barbara. It looks like Katherine will be alright, but of course the chemo could bring her down. Her relationship with Gabe is developing further and more quickly. He's a really good guy. I'm enjoying following them.
Again, enjoy your time with your mom. We'll all be here when you get back. Hugs
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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This is another well-written and interesting chapter, Barbara. It looks like Katherine will be alright, but of course the chemo could bring her down. Her relationship with Gabe is developing further and more quickly. He's a really good guy. I'm enjoying following them.
Again, enjoy your time with your mom. We'll all be here when you get back. Hugs
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
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You're welcome, Barbara.
Comment from AJ McCall
Hey, Barbara! I know I haven't reviewed in a while so I popped by to say hello and WHAT?
How much have I missed? Katherine has cancer? Her parents-in-law are trying to get custody of the boys again? There are only six posts LEFT? I going to have to catch up, lol. I hope you're feeling better! I read your author notes. I can't wait for the next chapter!
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Hey, Barbara! I know I haven't reviewed in a while so I popped by to say hello and WHAT?
How much have I missed? Katherine has cancer? Her parents-in-law are trying to get custody of the boys again? There are only six posts LEFT? I going to have to catch up, lol. I hope you're feeling better! I read your author notes. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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I know you're busy, but I've missed you. Thank you for the kind review.
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Aww, you're welcome! ;)
Comment from damommy
Those in-laws will stop at nothing, it seems, and the only reason they want the boys is because of the inheritance. I must believe that they won't be successful, but I'll see how it goes in the story. Texas can't be anymore football-minded than Arkansas! lol
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Those in-laws will stop at nothing, it seems, and the only reason they want the boys is because of the inheritance. I must believe that they won't be successful, but I'll see how it goes in the story. Texas can't be anymore football-minded than Arkansas! lol
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Football rules in Texas, yes, even over Arkansas. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, this was another lovely chapter, an very informative as well. I really like this Gabriel.
"I felt there wasn't any reason too = to
Thanks also for your informative notes. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Hi Barbara, this was another lovely chapter, an very informative as well. I really like this Gabriel.
"I felt there wasn't any reason too = to
Thanks also for your informative notes. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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I have mixed that little 'to' Thank you for the catch.
Comment from MissMerri
Another chapter chronicling the romantic day to day lives of Gabriel and Katherine. It is interesting to see how the circumstances of their lives show their different character traits as they interact. I'm enjoying the story very much. Your writing is superb.
One typo...
She cuddled into his chest and yawned. "I'll agree with that. I'm sorry I was being ridicules. (I think you meant ridiculous didn't you?)
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Another chapter chronicling the romantic day to day lives of Gabriel and Katherine. It is interesting to see how the circumstances of their lives show their different character traits as they interact. I'm enjoying the story very much. Your writing is superb.
One typo...
She cuddled into his chest and yawned. "I'll agree with that. I'm sorry I was being ridicules. (I think you meant ridiculous didn't you?)
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Sure did. Thank you for the catch. I appreciate the help.
Comment from BethShelby
This an excellent chapter. Of course, another problem popped up in that the former in-laws are going to take her to court again. These people have not feeling except from themselves. I thought I new what meant about the sewer drainage. I came home with a tubes for drainage with appendix and gall-batter surgery.
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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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This an excellent chapter. Of course, another problem popped up in that the former in-laws are going to take her to court again. These people have not feeling except from themselves. I thought I new what meant about the sewer drainage. I came home with a tubes for drainage with appendix and gall-batter surgery.
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. After I had gall-bladder surgery, I didn't have a sewer.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Barbara, this is the best book you've written, and that's a fact. It's believeable, because you know what Katherine is going through and you're using your experience to write this. I'm worried again about her dreadful in-laws, they should be put in prison and the key thrown away. How dare they use Katherines illness to gain points. I'm so glad she has Gabe by her side, and here son's are grounded in their loyalty to their mum and their coach. This is a lovely story, my friend. I'm loving it. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Barbara, this is the best book you've written, and that's a fact. It's believeable, because you know what Katherine is going through and you're using your experience to write this. I'm worried again about her dreadful in-laws, they should be put in prison and the key thrown away. How dare they use Katherines illness to gain points. I'm so glad she has Gabe by her side, and here son's are grounded in their loyalty to their mum and their coach. This is a lovely story, my friend. I'm loving it. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the encouragement. Everybody seems to have their own favorite book of mine. I like that.
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I've said that to all your books, Lol, I loved the one with the Jewish lady, you just keep bringing out such amazing stories. xx
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Thank you. You do too. This last one is wonderful!!!!
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Aw, thank you. :))
Comment from Begin Again
The storyline and your blushing characters are excellent as always. They are settling into a nice groove and Gabriel seems to have a firm hold on what really means the most to him.
I appreciate all the information you shared in your notes as well. Thank you so much.
Hugs, Carol
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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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The storyline and your blushing characters are excellent as always. They are settling into a nice groove and Gabriel seems to have a firm hold on what really means the most to him.
I appreciate all the information you shared in your notes as well. Thank you so much.
Hugs, Carol
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much. Still praying.
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Thanks... LIfe has jumped into the cesspool again but I am handling it, I think. Or at least I am trying. Have a great visit with your Mom.
And Arianna has paid for 5 treatments and I believe Mayo has agreed to transfer her to the clinic on Tuesday if necessary. That's a plus!
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Quick question - is her liver affected???