Football - A Novel
Viewing comments for Chapter 61 "Football Chapter 33 part 1"A mother faces life's struggles.
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Comment from judiverse
So Katherine has another problem to worry about besides Ivory, besides the custody suit. I think I'm with her on holding off telling Gabriel until she has results from the tests. She has such a hectic schedule, and Gabriel has added to it. Maybe the possibility of having breast cancer will make her cut back. It sounds like they have long distances to travel to those games and meets in Texas. That's another complication. Great characterization. Good luck with your wrist. Therapy is so hard.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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So Katherine has another problem to worry about besides Ivory, besides the custody suit. I think I'm with her on holding off telling Gabriel until she has results from the tests. She has such a hectic schedule, and Gabriel has added to it. Maybe the possibility of having breast cancer will make her cut back. It sounds like they have long distances to travel to those games and meets in Texas. That's another complication. Great characterization. Good luck with your wrist. Therapy is so hard.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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You're very welcome. We'll all be interested to know how Katherine's test result turns out. More stressful things keep piling up on her. judi
Comment from Shirley McLain
Excellent writing without mistakes as usual. I can tell you are a writer at heart and much better than myself. I do enjoy reading your work. Have a great afternoon. Shirley
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Excellent writing without mistakes as usual. I can tell you are a writer at heart and much better than myself. I do enjoy reading your work. Have a great afternoon. Shirley
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the encouraging review. I've read some of your work you are very good.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
High time for a sssssseries bonussssss! You continue to maintain interest as you develop this sweet relationship in a natural, unrushed manner though their rich interactions. Thanks for another ssssssuperb chapter. Cheerssssss. LIZ
Glad your fingers are bak in action.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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High time for a sssssseries bonussssss! You continue to maintain interest as you develop this sweet relationship in a natural, unrushed manner though their rich interactions. Thanks for another ssssssuperb chapter. Cheerssssss. LIZ
Glad your fingers are bak in action.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the encouraging review. My fingers still have limited action but getting there.
Comment from Ulla
This is such a lovely continuation to the story. At last they are now acknowledging their love for each, finally we have reached that point. Now, she also managed to get rid of that dreadful Melton. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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This is such a lovely continuation to the story. At last they are now acknowledging their love for each, finally we have reached that point. Now, she also managed to get rid of that dreadful Melton. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from nomi338
There is a thing called decisiveness and there is a contrasting thing called domineering. Some men are clearly confused when it comes to knowing the difference. What intelligent woman wants a man who is domineering, will not accept no thank you as a choice that every woman has. When he disrespects your wish to be left alone, that you are in a relationship that you treasure and enjoy, why can he not just walk away. A man like this is not attractive and if indulged will wind up abusing the woman as soon as he feels he can. I believe that this is an important element in the story that was handled well. Excellent.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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There is a thing called decisiveness and there is a contrasting thing called domineering. Some men are clearly confused when it comes to knowing the difference. What intelligent woman wants a man who is domineering, will not accept no thank you as a choice that every woman has. When he disrespects your wish to be left alone, that you are in a relationship that you treasure and enjoy, why can he not just walk away. A man like this is not attractive and if indulged will wind up abusing the woman as soon as he feels he can. I believe that this is an important element in the story that was handled well. Excellent.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the encouraging review. Thank you for your insight. You are so correct.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I'm glad that the relationship between Gabriel and Katherine are getting closer and better but a new conflict appears. Katherine might have breast cancer. And she also has a new suiter.
Well done and can't wait read the next chapter.
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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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I'm glad that the relationship between Gabriel and Katherine are getting closer and better but a new conflict appears. Katherine might have breast cancer. And she also has a new suiter.
Well done and can't wait read the next chapter.
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
So the lump on the breast is benign? I sure hope so...I like the story....the plots keep a person going; reading every chapter and the exciting plots are never boring.
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So the lump on the breast is benign? I sure hope so...I like the story....the plots keep a person going; reading every chapter and the exciting plots are never boring.
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the encouraging review. We shall see about the cancer.