Revenge
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Comment from Jasmine Girl
I enjoy reading this chapter. You are natural at making fun characters and witty dialogues. I like these two characters and they come alive from the paper.
I see James is actually Vito.
Exceptionally done.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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I enjoy reading this chapter. You are natural at making fun characters and witty dialogues. I like these two characters and they come alive from the paper.
I see James is actually Vito.
Exceptionally done.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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I love the tit-for-tat dialogue and especially when it's between two people who are actually on opposite sides. You made me smile and that's a difficult task of late. Thank you...
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
My head continues to spin! Am I supposed to me able to guess as to how the plot lines will intersect? I'm awed at your ambition in conjuring and executing such a rich story! Vivid imagery, colorful characters, superb dialog!
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My head continues to spin! Am I supposed to me able to guess as to how the plot lines will intersect? I'm awed at your ambition in conjuring and executing such a rich story! Vivid imagery, colorful characters, superb dialog!
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Comment Written 12-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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I think by the end of the weekend or at least by next week, you will see the entire connection and learn how evil some people can be. Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Thank you so much.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
An interesting aside to the business of your writing Carol, I wonder if Jasmine is one of the girls James has on the side of the proposal that Samantha has put to him. But she was a little surprised that he Said he had Welcher in his back pocket, well done Carol, great write, blessings Roy
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An interesting aside to the business of your writing Carol, I wonder if Jasmine is one of the girls James has on the side of the proposal that Samantha has put to him. But she was a little surprised that he Said he had Welcher in his back pocket, well done Carol, great write, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 12-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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Yes, the information about Welcfher was a surprise to Samantha, but you can bet she'll be on it like a hound dog... I have had the whole afternoon to myself and it feels so good to have peace and quiet and the opportunity to write. It ends here in about fifteen minutes but I am greatly appreciative of what I had. Thanks for the review and for taking the time to read. Always thinking of you, Carol
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Bless you Carol,