Revenge
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Revenge - Chap 17"Evil stalks the dynamic crime team
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Comment from Jasmine Girl
I enjoy the conversation between James and Welchar, very snappy. You did a great job. But I couldn't find who James is in the character list. Samantha is an interesting character.
Well done and looking forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I enjoy the conversation between James and Welchar, very snappy. You did a great job. But I couldn't find who James is in the character list. Samantha is an interesting character.
Well done and looking forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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My apologies for responding with a thank you so late, but know I truly appreciate your time and the review.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
You have a really good story going here and some interesting characters. Are James and Vito the same character? I look forward to reading more of this and meeting some of these other characters.
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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You have a really good story going here and some interesting characters. Are James and Vito the same character? I look forward to reading more of this and meeting some of these other characters.
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I find my mind walks easier through a dark fictional murder mystery than it can through reality at the moment. Please know that without your support and constant encouragement, I doubt that I could exist. The only glimmer of hope I find is with you and others like you on this site. I am so appreciative of your time and effort to review my story and I apologize for always being behind with my thank yous. please know that I read each and everyone when they arrive though I lag far behind in the thank you department.
Your support is my silver lining. Thank you! Carol
Comment from egomega
Excellent dialogue that draws the reader in and keeps things moving. You do a great job of setting up the conflict and keeping the reader curious about where things are headed. You are a talented writer. Let me know when the book comes out.
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Excellent dialogue that draws the reader in and keeps things moving. You do a great job of setting up the conflict and keeping the reader curious about where things are headed. You are a talented writer. Let me know when the book comes out.
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I find my mind walks easier through a dark fictional murder mystery than it can through reality at the moment. Please know that without your support and constant encouragement, I doubt that I could exist. The only glimmer of hope I find is with you and others like you on this site. I am so appreciative of your time and effort to review my story and I apologize for always being behind with my thank yous. please know that I read each and everyone when they arrive though I lag far behind in the thank you department.
Your support is my silver lining. Thank you! Carol
