Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

Wow, you've certainly put volumes of wisdom in this one line. Loved the imagery, visuals, the subtle humor, artistic presentation and the artwork.

Good luck in the contest.

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Hi Eternal Muse,

Oh, thank you kindly for your stellar review and perceptive comments on my VERY short poem (if one line is really a poem Lol)

I greatly appreciate your time to read and assess. Thanks again :))

Take care,
Senyai

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Hi Eternal Muse,

Oh, thank you kindly for your stellar review and perceptive comments on my VERY short poem (if one line is really a poem Lol)

I greatly appreciate your time to read and assess. Thanks again :))

Take care,
Senyai

Comment from Janetsue

Excellent

I enjoyed this entire posting...the artwork and the alliteration in a very interesting monostitch poem. I think it is a super entry in the One Line Poem contest and I wish you the best!

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Hi Spangle,

Oh, you are so kind and I love your stellar review! Your encouraging thoughts on my one liner frankly made my day. Thank you as your input is always appreciated :))

Always,
Senyai

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Hi Spangle,

Oh, you are so kind and I love your stellar review! Your encouraging thoughts on my one liner frankly made my day. Thank you as your input is always appreciated :))

Always,
Senyai

reply by Janetsue on 29-Oct-2021

:-)

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

I know a few people who believe they have all the answers and things will always go their way.... until the ship sinks and you forgot the lifeboats. Great one-line poem. Good luck in the contest.

Hugs, Carol

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Hi Carol,

Precisely! The Titanic comes to mind here, LOL? Only a presumptuous fool would think there is no room for error in their plans?we know better :))

Life is a continuing crisis, don?t ya know?

Always love hearing from you, Carol.

Take care and stay safe :))

Senyai

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Hi Carol,

Precisely! The Titanic comes to mind here, LOL? Only a presumptuous fool would think there is no room for error in their plans?we know better :))

Life is a continuing crisis, don?t ya know?

Always love hearing from you, Carol.

Take care and stay safe :))

Senyai

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Hi Raul,

Good to hear from you! Thank you kindly for such a stellar review on my tiny tiny one liner poem?if it can indeed be called a poem LOL.

Hope all is well with you, Raul.

Stay healthy and happy :))

Senyai

Comment from Mary Shifman

Excellent

Yes, you are so right. Reminds me of the Titanic. It was supposed to be unsinkable! I had a boyfriend when I was young who delighted in saying, "Only fools are positive." Good luck in the contest.

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Hi Mary,

Wow, I?ll have to jot that one down? "Only fools are positive" LOL. Love it!

My husband and I have running arguments on who is the pessimist and who the optimist in any given situation. We constantly switch off hahaha. But hoping for the best but planning for the worst wastes so much time even though it is the wise thing to do .

Loved your review, Mary. Thank you!

Take care and stay healthy and happy :))

Senyai

reply by Mary Shifman on 29-Oct-2021

You are welcome.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Senyai,
This poem is a good bit of alliterative advice. Though I don't think anyone can avoid being foolhardy their whole lives. You can try your best to keep to the failsafe.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Hi Joan,

So so true! Only a presumptuous fool would assume their plans are without room for error?but planning for the worst wastes so much time, even though it is the prudent thing to do LOL.

Thank you for a stellar review, Joan. Much appreciated.

Take care and stay healthy and happy :))
Senyai

reply by dragonpoet on 29-Oct-2021

You're very welcome, Senyai.
Joan

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A great play on words here and I would love to know that your failsafe is here as it might be useful! Ha ha ha, you made me smile, much enjoyed a clever write, love Dolly x

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021

Hi Dolly,

Thanks for this amusing review and so glad you liked my silly poem. Only a presumptuous fool would think there is no room for error :))

Happy Thursday, Dolly

Always,
Senyai

reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021

Hi Dolly,

Thanks for this amusing review and so glad you liked my silly poem. Only a presumptuous fool would think there is no room for error :))

Happy Thursday, Dolly

Always,
Senyai

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Excellent one line poem. I think these are really hard to do and make a statement and make sense.
Great alliteration in a fun and uplifting line.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021

Hi Janet,

Thank you kindly for an awesome review and well wishes. Much appreciated!

Happy Thursday, Janet :))

Senyai

reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021

Hi Janet,

Thank you kindly for an awesome review and well wishes. Much appreciated!

Happy Thursday, Janet :))

Senyai

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Nothing is foolproof. LOL Thank you fir sharing this contest entry with us. It causes me to think about the Titanic, the unsinkable ship. Look how that turned out. Good luck with the contest.

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021

Hi Barbara,

Yes, case in point? the sinking Titanic. Only a presumptuous fool would believe anything is fool proof with no room for error.

Thanks for an astute review. Always glad to hear from you!

Happy Thursday :))
Senyai

reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021

Hi Barbara,

Yes, case in point? the sinking Titanic. Only a presumptuous fool would believe anything is fool proof with no room for error.

Thanks for an astute review. Always glad to hear from you!

Happy Thursday :))
Senyai

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I like the three "F"s of language, upbeat and optimistic, to follow the two foolhardy and foolproof is enough to lead to the conclusion of of failsafe, well done, good luck, blessings Roy

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021

Hi,Roy,

Thank you greatly for your perceptive thoughts and generous review!

Actually only a presumptuous fool would think there is no room for error?at least in this life. LOL.

Have a great day, Roy :))
Senayi

reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021

Hi,Roy,

Thank you greatly for your perceptive thoughts and generous review!

Actually only a presumptuous fool would think there is no room for error?at least in this life. LOL.

Have a great day, Roy :))
Senayi