Comment from Susan Newell

Excellent

FS freezing. Good chapter for moving the plot along and reminding us that someone had seen someone else dispose of the body. The tattoo may play an important role. Will save B4 this freezes.

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 Comment Written 17-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021

Thanks, Sue. I have been having a similar problem. That's why it took me so long to post. It's crazy! It was a slow chapter but I didn't know how else to make the connection. Thanks for the review.

Hugs, Carol

reply by Susan Newell on 17-Oct-2021

Tom denies it's FS. I'm noticing a connection with the loading of ads. I'm unable to do decent reviews. I won't re-up my membership if he doesn't fix it.

reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021

I do get it with a few other sites but the biggest offender is on FS. It seems to spin and spin forever. I am sometimes on at 3 in the morning so they can't say the site is overloaded in my area.

Carol

Comment from Sherry Asbury

Excellent

I will be reading this from the start. You have an excellent way of writing. I liked the bugs thing and the way Garth seemed to know more than he told. A very engaging story and well presented.

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 Comment Written 17-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021

Thanks Sherry for the review and all your kind words. I truly appreciate your kindness.

Always, Carol

reply by Sherry Asbury on 17-Oct-2021

I always manage to come in in the middle, LOL

reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021

At least there is only four chapters this time and the fifth is about to post. Thanks again!

reply by Sherry Asbury on 17-Oct-2021

I love your work and look forward to the next...