Revenge
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Comment from BethShelby
I glad you had Garth repeat everything that happened in order to bright you readers back up to speed. I hope that wasn't Jazz is body that the guys drug out onto the beach. I can this is going to be a great story. You certainly know how to keep us on edge. You are excellent novelist. I don't know how you do it with bad things happening in your own world.
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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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I glad you had Garth repeat everything that happened in order to bright you readers back up to speed. I hope that wasn't Jazz is body that the guys drug out onto the beach. I can this is going to be a great story. You certainly know how to keep us on edge. You are excellent novelist. I don't know how you do it with bad things happening in your own world.
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Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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Thanks, Beth - In order to write, I forget about myself and climb into my characters' thoughts and lives... sometimes that's good and other times not so much. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Hugs, Carol
