Football - A Novel
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Comment from Gert sherwood
What a great chapter Barb I enjoyed it so much
by knowing that Gabriel and Katherine realize they are i love with each other. Now us readers need to wait the results of the MRI.
Gert
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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What a great chapter Barb I enjoyed it so much
by knowing that Gabriel and Katherine realize they are i love with each other. Now us readers need to wait the results of the MRI.
Gert
Comment Written 05-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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Sure do and see if Katherine and Gabriel can pull it off. I can promise more issues.
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Good I will be waiting Barb
Gert
Comment from Anne Johnston
Another great chapter in your story. I am glad that Jordan's injury was not serious. It must be hard for a mother to see her son hurt in this way. Looks like the romance part is coming along well.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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Another great chapter in your story. I am glad that Jordan's injury was not serious. It must be hard for a mother to see her son hurt in this way. Looks like the romance part is coming along well.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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I hope romance is ahead, but we'll have to see. Yes, it is hard for a mother to see this.
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You are welcome. Keep the chapters coming.
Comment from royowen
So the good news is Jordan will make a full recovery. The better news is Katharine knows all about Coach caring about his players, and the confession is they are both falling for each other, such a good story, and less than a month too. Beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy
Typo : We can't lose sight (of) that
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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So the good news is Jordan will make a full recovery. The better news is Katharine knows all about Coach caring about his players, and the confession is they are both falling for each other, such a good story, and less than a month too. Beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy
Typo : We can't lose sight (of) that
Comment Written 05-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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Thank you and I will make that correction. I have a bad habit of forgetting those little words.
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My pleasure
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your story is playing into the game of football and perhaps some injuries. Glad that this football player's injury was not severe. Although, concussions can be serious.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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Your story is playing into the game of football and perhaps some injuries. Glad that this football player's injury was not severe. Although, concussions can be serious.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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It sure can. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from AJ McCall
WOW. I guess I missed A LOT, LOL. But I'm back!!!
I'm sorry I missed the other chapters but I can tell just from reading this one that something happened with a custody order.
Jordon got injured and was sent to the hospital, and Katherine and Gabriel have grown CLOSER!!
I love how you wrote the number of days they've know each other. I can't wait to see the number 365.
Now, for grammar, I did spot one typo: "Thank you. We appreciate(.")
- We appreciate (it)
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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WOW. I guess I missed A LOT, LOL. But I'm back!!!
I'm sorry I missed the other chapters but I can tell just from reading this one that something happened with a custody order.
Jordon got injured and was sent to the hospital, and Katherine and Gabriel have grown CLOSER!!
I love how you wrote the number of days they've know each other. I can't wait to see the number 365.
Now, for grammar, I did spot one typo: "Thank you. We appreciate(.")
- We appreciate (it)
Comment Written 05-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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Will fix that area. Thank you for the catch and welcome back.
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You're welcome!!! ;)
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Love your new pic by the way!
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Thank you.
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;)
Comment from BethShelby
Katherine is starting to realize that Gabrial is an really good guy in spite of her doubt. Falling in love for someone with her background would be scary. Apparently he is feeling more for her than he had planned and is feeling he is loosing himself to his emotions.
I'm glad to see you still use the word "that" quite a big but you use it correctly. We can't lose sight that (of that) ?
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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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Katherine is starting to realize that Gabrial is an really good guy in spite of her doubt. Falling in love for someone with her background would be scary. Apparently he is feeling more for her than he had planned and is feeling he is loosing himself to his emotions.
I'm glad to see you still use the word "that" quite a big but you use it correctly. We can't lose sight that (of that) ?
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Comment Written 05-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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True, there is a place for 'that' but if it can be omitted and the meaning of the sentence not altered, it needs to be omitted. Thank you for the kind review.