Phone Calls from Caroline
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Dying on the Floor"A cousin calls her younger cousin to rant.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading your contest entry. If was very truthful I could feel the conversation really happening. Good luck.
Anyway, this is your cousin Caroline. (comma needed after cousin)
If can't get to the phone, (If I?????can't get to the phone,)
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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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I enjoyed reading your contest entry. If was very truthful I could feel the conversation really happening. Good luck.
Anyway, this is your cousin Caroline. (comma needed after cousin)
If can't get to the phone, (If I?????can't get to the phone,)
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Comment Written 07-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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Thank you Barbara, I appreciate the review and comments, and thanks for noticing the errors.
Beth
