Football - A Novel
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Football Chapter 19 part 1"A mother faces life's struggles.
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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Touching interaction--you handled it with great sensitivity--seemed true to life under the circumstances--I can't grasp why they are so afraid of beign "caught" by the vindictive guy's PI--what power does he hold over them? I look forward to the arrogant boys getting trounced by the girls!
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reply by the author on 30-May-2021
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Touching interaction--you handled it with great sensitivity--seemed true to life under the circumstances--I can't grasp why they are so afraid of beign "caught" by the vindictive guy's PI--what power does he hold over them? I look forward to the arrogant boys getting trounced by the girls!
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Comment Written 30-May-2021
reply by the author on 30-May-2021
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Everything will start coming our very soon. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
Katherine seems to be very self-assured in her role as teacher and coach. I don't think her self-esteem is low in this area. Maybe it is low when it comes to dealing with relationships since her first one didn't turn our so well. I'm enjoying to story and I always look forward to the next chapter.
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reply by the author on 30-May-2021
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Katherine seems to be very self-assured in her role as teacher and coach. I don't think her self-esteem is low in this area. Maybe it is low when it comes to dealing with relationships since her first one didn't turn our so well. I'm enjoying to story and I always look forward to the next chapter.
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Comment Written 30-May-2021
reply by the author on 30-May-2021
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Yes, it is low in that area. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from AJ McCall
Hahaha! It's always fun to have the boys vs. girls! And being a very competitive person I'd be ready for any challenge!! But I'd like to address something first...
GABRIEL ALMOST KISSED HER!! I'm excited and nervous at the same time for Kathrine. They need to get rid of the ridiculous P.I so that they can be together FREELY. The story's got me all emotional, lol.
I didn't see any typos but I would consider re-doing the last part of this sentence: "We've only ran that hill four times and your team has ran it for, what years?"
"-for what, years?
And then in the author notes I noticed you didn't finish spelling 'boyfriend'.
I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
reply by the author on 30-May-2021
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Hahaha! It's always fun to have the boys vs. girls! And being a very competitive person I'd be ready for any challenge!! But I'd like to address something first...
GABRIEL ALMOST KISSED HER!! I'm excited and nervous at the same time for Kathrine. They need to get rid of the ridiculous P.I so that they can be together FREELY. The story's got me all emotional, lol.
I didn't see any typos but I would consider re-doing the last part of this sentence: "We've only ran that hill four times and your team has ran it for, what years?"
"-for what, years?
And then in the author notes I noticed you didn't finish spelling 'boyfriend'.
I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
Comment Written 30-May-2021
reply by the author on 30-May-2021
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I will make those adjustments. Thank you for the kind review.
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You're very welcome!
