More Than One Way
I took the picture by myself.38 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a wonderful consciousness raising directive. At first when I looked at the "picture" and saw it was all black, I thought, 'Oh it didn't come out. I wonder if she knows' then I thought, it would be cool to imagine something for the picture. And that was what you want the reader to do. Very clever.
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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This is a wonderful consciousness raising directive. At first when I looked at the "picture" and saw it was all black, I thought, 'Oh it didn't come out. I wonder if she knows' then I thought, it would be cool to imagine something for the picture. And that was what you want the reader to do. Very clever.
Comment Written 22-May-2021
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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Thank you. I just wanted to participate in the contest and I knew I could not do it the obvious way. I appreciate your comments and review. Hugs.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, More Than One Way, is so important and I think it is genius of you to use this photograph to represent the one sense most of us default to instead of the others which all want to assist us.
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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This poem, More Than One Way, is so important and I think it is genius of you to use this photograph to represent the one sense most of us default to instead of the others which all want to assist us.
Comment Written 21-May-2021
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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Thank you so much for that and for the six stars! The credit for the idea goes to the CEC because it is their contest. I wanted to participate, and this was the only way I could. Thank you so much again. Hugs.
Comment from karenina
I find these precious gems and berate myself for not holding on to some six star treasures to offer back. How stunning a verse! Of course (of course!) I thought to myself "Hmm, the photo did not download..."
How clever of you to show us your world... to broaden our perception of "seeing" beyond these eyes we take for granted...
I did as you suggested. I stepped away from this laptop and sat outside for a few moments, eyes closed...
I heard the birds sing, the woosh of their wings as they took flight. I felt the brush of breeze blowing through grass upon which I'd rested my bare feet...
My other senses came alive in ways I'd never appreciated! A child's laughter from somewhere down the street brought her smile to my heart. I could see joy.
Accolades are not enough, Leann-- Perhaps a heartfelt thank you can help you see my appreciation?
Karenina
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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I find these precious gems and berate myself for not holding on to some six star treasures to offer back. How stunning a verse! Of course (of course!) I thought to myself "Hmm, the photo did not download..."
How clever of you to show us your world... to broaden our perception of "seeing" beyond these eyes we take for granted...
I did as you suggested. I stepped away from this laptop and sat outside for a few moments, eyes closed...
I heard the birds sing, the woosh of their wings as they took flight. I felt the brush of breeze blowing through grass upon which I'd rested my bare feet...
My other senses came alive in ways I'd never appreciated! A child's laughter from somewhere down the street brought her smile to my heart. I could see joy.
Accolades are not enough, Leann-- Perhaps a heartfelt thank you can help you see my appreciation?
Karenina
Comment Written 21-May-2021
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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Thank you so, so much for these lovely comments. I actually have chills. I am so happy that you went outside and closed your eyes to experience everything your other senses had to offer. It is quite amazing, isn't it? and thank you especially for sharing what you experienced with me. Hugs and blessings to you always.
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MY son was born with limited hearing in one ear...then he went totally deaf after his first born child was born. I was devastated, of course... Some time later a cochlear implant restored some minimal hearing...he told me then, his other senses picked up where his hearing left off... So after reading your very moving piece I truly wanted to experience this! In college I had a very close blind friend who (I swear!) could tell me what color I was wearing by touching it... Never did comprehend it... Now I realize I don't have to understand it...just embrace the miracle!---Karenina
Comment from Sharon Davis
A very effective and sensory rich piece. The poem"s message is powerfully conveyed, offering much food for thought. The piece is well suited to the writing prompt. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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A very effective and sensory rich piece. The poem"s message is powerfully conveyed, offering much food for thought. The piece is well suited to the writing prompt. Nicely done.
Comment Written 21-May-2021
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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Thank you, Sharon, for your kind review. I appreciate your time and words. Hugs to you.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
More Than One Way
by Leann DS
I like your clever poem about the beauty that is around us and that so many don't see. I like your black picture to let the reader imagine. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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More Than One Way
by Leann DS
I like your clever poem about the beauty that is around us and that so many don't see. I like your black picture to let the reader imagine. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 21-May-2021
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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Thank you so much for your encouraging words and the six stars. I appreciate it. hugs and blessings to you.
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You're welcome :)
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Leann.
This is an exceptional piece of writing. It not only startles the reader from the first view, but, it tells a story in exquisite detail. I was struck by the different senses you included. Your descriptions of the aromas, taste, sensations, and impressions immerse the reader into the experience.
Outstanding. Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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Hello Leann.
This is an exceptional piece of writing. It not only startles the reader from the first view, but, it tells a story in exquisite detail. I was struck by the different senses you included. Your descriptions of the aromas, taste, sensations, and impressions immerse the reader into the experience.
Outstanding. Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 21-May-2021
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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Thank you, Robert. You are so kind. I appreciate your supportive words and your six star rating! Wow! Hugs and blessings to you.
Comment from Begin Again
Outstanding, LeAnn... My son is blind in one eye and very poor eyesight in the other... Because he has been that way since four, I guess I never think about how he sees the world. Being handicapped, he probably doesn't either. Your words about senses and sight gave me much to think about. thanks for sharing. Love ya, Carol
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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Outstanding, LeAnn... My son is blind in one eye and very poor eyesight in the other... Because he has been that way since four, I guess I never think about how he sees the world. Being handicapped, he probably doesn't either. Your words about senses and sight gave me much to think about. thanks for sharing. Love ya, Carol
Comment Written 21-May-2021
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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Thank you, Carol. Every day, we find more and more things that we have in common. This is certainly a friendship that is fated to be. God bless you, and thank you so much for your great review and stars. Hugs and blessings always.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Thank you for sharing your
photograph and poem, Leann.
-It is a beautiful poem with
so many lovely images as
you invite us into your world.
-I like how you appeal to each sense
in a different way for us to appreciate, like
"Watch" the whispers of soft, warm breeze,."
-Excellent closing verses, too.
-Good luck in the contest; you deserve it!
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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-Thank you for sharing your
photograph and poem, Leann.
-It is a beautiful poem with
so many lovely images as
you invite us into your world.
-I like how you appeal to each sense
in a different way for us to appreciate, like
"Watch" the whispers of soft, warm breeze,."
-Excellent closing verses, too.
-Good luck in the contest; you deserve it!
Comment Written 21-May-2021
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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Thank you so much, Pam, for your supportive and lovely review. I appreciate your words and thank you for the six stars! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. Hugs and blessings to you.
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, Leann! It was a beautiful and inspiring poem.
Comment from Wendy G
So very well written. So creative and imaginative. So insightful. You have created such a unique piece of writing, inviting us into your world of darkness - and yet you see with a clarity and beauty that most of the rest of us don't. Congratulations on this original and lovely piece.
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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So very well written. So creative and imaginative. So insightful. You have created such a unique piece of writing, inviting us into your world of darkness - and yet you see with a clarity and beauty that most of the rest of us don't. Congratulations on this original and lovely piece.
Comment Written 21-May-2021
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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Thank you so much for your complementary and supportive review. Your encouragement and kind words are humbly appreciated. Hugs and blessings to you.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
A very creative write. Yes. Once we have our senses in order and not frittered away in pursuit of cheap worldly pleasures, we see and feel nature in its glory and get healed. It will soothe our souls. Much enjoyed your beautiful poem. Good luck!
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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A very creative write. Yes. Once we have our senses in order and not frittered away in pursuit of cheap worldly pleasures, we see and feel nature in its glory and get healed. It will soothe our souls. Much enjoyed your beautiful poem. Good luck!
Comment Written 21-May-2021
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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Thank you so much, Friend, for your kind words and loving comments. You are appreciated. Hugs and blessings to you always.